Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains several grammar and clarity errors and some unclear words. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, correct tense and pronouns, and specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example: “and”, “so”, “because”, “then”). Keep it natural and concise (no more than 4–5 sentences).

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was bright red and my parents gave it to me for my eighth birthday. I rode it almost every day around the neighborhood, and I often practiced turns and small jumps with my friends. Because I rode so much, I became quite confident on two wheels.

제안: This answer is generally clear and relevant but has a small mistake (“learn to run” is incorrect for learning to ride). Improve by adding a topic sentence, one or two specific supporting details, and a linking word for coherence. Use vocabulary related to transport and commuting.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips and commuting because they are cheap, convenient and help avoid traffic. For example, students often cycle to school and shop owners use bikes to deliver goods, so cycling is a common part of daily life.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was now bright red my my ankle gave me and I used to write it to the bulk almost every day.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a bright red one, my uncle gave it to me, and I used to ride it to the park almost every day.

The original contains multiple problems but they fall mainly under past tense and word choice affecting past-tense narration. 'now' is incorrect for past description and should be 'a' or 'a bright red one'. 'my my ankle gave me' appears to be a misstatement; likely intended 'my uncle gave it to me' (proper noun/pronoun and past tense verb 'gave'). 'write' is a wrong verb form/word; the correct past habitual action is 'used to ride'. 'the bulk' is incorrect; context suggests 'the park' or 'the block'—'park' fits common usage. The sentence should keep past tense consistently. Suggestion: ensure past-tense verbs (had, gave, used to ride) and use correct nouns (uncle, park) or substitute accurate words if different meaning was intended.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. People often use them for short trips and commuting because they are cheap and convenient, and many children learn to run.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. People often use them for short trips and commuting because they are cheap and convenient, and many children learn to ride them.

The phrase 'learn to run' is incorrect when referring to bicycles. The correct verb pattern is 'learn to ride' (infinitive) or 'learn riding' (gerund), but 'learn to ride' is natural. This is a verb + -ing/form error because the intended activity requires a different verb. Suggestion: use 'learn to ride them' to clearly indicate children learn how to use bicycles.