Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Keep your response direct and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then add one brief supporting detail. Avoid tense inconsistencies and redundant phrases (e.g. "in the childhood"). Use linking words if you add more than one idea. Also keep it within 1–3 sentences for Part 1.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I liked bikes a lot, but my family couldn’t afford one at the time, so I usually rode with friends instead.

제안: Give a clear, concise opinion first, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words ("uh", "according to me") and repetition. Use correct comparative language ("more affordable than cars") and complete your sentence. Keep it to 2–3 sentences maximum.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people prefer them because they are much more affordable than cars and they are easier to park in crowded cities.

× I like the bike so much but unfortunately I didn't have any type of bike in the childhood.

✓ I liked bikes very much, but unfortunately I didn't have any kind of bike in my childhood.

Tense consistency and article/use errors: The student begins with present tense 'I like' while referring to a past period ('when you were a child'). Use past tense 'I liked' to match the time frame. 'any type of bike' is awkward; 'any kind of bike' or 'a bike' is more natural. Also 'in the childhood' is incorrect; use 'in my childhood' or 'when I was a child'. Recommendation: Keep verb tenses consistent with the time reference and use 'my childhood' rather than 'the childhood'. Note: This correction addresses present/past tense mismatch (Grammar Problem Type 6) and article/preposition phrasing ('in my childhood') which falls under Present tense issue as primary error per instructions.

× Yes, according to me, the bikes are very popular in country in in our country uh, all my friends have bikes and uh bike is a very affording according to the car.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, bikes are very popular in our country; all my friends have bikes, and a bike is much more affordable than a car.

Multiple issues: 'according to me' is not natural English; use 'in my opinion.' Remove duplicate words 'in country in in.' Use 'our country' rather than 'in country.' The phrase 'bike is a very affording according to the car' is grammatically incorrect: use 'a bike is much more affordable than a car.' Also ensure articles: 'a bike' and 'a car.' Use comparative structure 'more affordable than' to compare. Recommendation: Use clear comparative form and natural phrases ('in my opinion', 'in our country'). Note: The primary grammatical problems corrected here are present tense phrasing and comparative expression (Grammar Problem Type 6 and 25), with focus on natural wording as required.

× Oh sorry bike is very affordable as compared to the.

✓ Oh, sorry, a bike is very affordable compared to a car.

Article and incomplete comparison: 'bike' requires the indefinite article 'a' here ('a bike'). The original sentence ends abruptly 'as compared to the.' Complete the comparison by specifying the other item: 'compared to a car.' Also add commas for natural speech punctuation. Recommendation: Always include the noun after 'compared to' and use 'a' or 'the' as appropriate. Note: This correction targets article errors and incomplete comparative structure (Grammar Problem Type 22 and 25).