Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise and include a brief additional detail with a linking word. Correct verb tenses and use a past form for actions. Keep to 1–3 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add a short detail using a linking word such as "because" or "so".

예시: Yes, I did. My mother bought me a bike when I was in Year 6, so I rode it to school and around the neighborhood every day.

제안: Make the response more natural and specific: use clearer linking words and give a concise reason plus an example or consequence. Avoid repeating phrases like "in my country." Keep it to 1–3 sentences and vary vocabulary (e.g., "motorbikes" instead of "motorbike").

예시: Not really — bicycles are less popular now because most people prefer motorbikes for speed and convenience, so you see far fewer cyclists in cities.

× Yes of course I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, of course I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with a past time marker 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'had' to match the past time reference. Also add a comma after 'Yes' for clarity.

× My mom buy it for me when I was in year 6.

✓ My mom bought it for me when I was in Year 6.

The action happened in the past, so the past tense form 'bought' is required instead of 'buy'. Capitalize 'Year' in this school grade context and keep the past time reference 'when I was in Year 6'."

× I think right now it's not so popular in my country because in my country people usually take a motorbike over bikes.

✓ I think right now they are not so popular in my country because people usually take motorbikes instead of bicycles.

Use 'they are' to refer to 'bikes' in the present tense. 'Motorbike' should be plural to match 'people usually take', so use 'motorbikes'. 'Over' is the incorrect preposition here; use 'instead of' to express preference. 'Bicycles' is a more natural plural noun than 'bikes' after 'instead of'.