Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words if you add more information and avoid repetition. For example, correct tense (“I had” not “I do have”) and articles (“a bike” → “a bike” already present but fix collocation “ride bike” → “ride my bike”).

예시: I had a bike when I was a child, and I loved riding it. For instance, I used to cycle to school every day, which helped me stay active and saved my family time and money.

제안: Improve fluency by removing hesitations and using more precise vocabulary. Begin with a clear opinion, then give two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because / moreover / also). Correct grammar: “easier than cars,” “affordable for many people,” and avoid vague phrases like “every person.”

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in Pakistan because they are easier to ride than cars and are much more affordable for many people. Additionally, they are economical to maintain, which makes them a practical choice for daily commuting.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child and I love to ride bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I loved to ride it.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses. The situation refers to the past, so past tense verbs are required (had, loved). Also 'ride bike' needs an article or pronoun and 'it' refers to the bike. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for past events and include appropriate object pronoun: 'I had a bike...' and 'I loved to ride it.'

× Yes, in Pakistan bikes are popular uh, because it is so easy, uh easy to ride then a car and it is also feel affordable for every person.

✓ Yes, in Pakistan bikes are popular because they are so easy to ride compared to cars and they also feel affordable for most people.

Several issues: 'it is so easy' should agree with plural subject 'bikes' so use 'they are' (subject-verb agreement). 'then a car' is wrong preposition/comparison; use 'compared to cars' or 'than cars' for comparison. 'it is also feel affordable' mixes pronoun and verb forms; use 'they also feel affordable' or 'they are also affordable.' 'every person' is awkward; 'most people' or 'many people' is better. Suggestion: keep subject-verb agreement for plural nouns, use correct comparative phrasing ('compared to' or 'than'), and use appropriate quantifier.'