Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make a clear, grammatical topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two brief supporting details. Correct verb forms and word order (e.g., "I am currently working...", "I completed..."). Keep it concise and avoid redundant phrases.

예시: I am currently working as a rehabilitation specialist at UMM Hospital. I completed my rehabilitation training two years ago, and I have been practicing in this role since then.

제안: Answer directly (state the institution) and avoid unfinished sentences. Use a short topic sentence and one supporting detail about the program or place. Use correct prepositions ("at the Faculty of Medicine of Sirat Hospital").

예시: I completed my rehabilitation training at the Faculty of Medicine of Sirat Hospital. Before that, I attended a local high school in my hometown.

제안: Give a direct yes/no with a clear reason and one specific supporting detail. Use correct grammar and smoother linking (e.g., "because"). Avoid vague endings; finish the thought about the atmosphere.

예시: Yes, it is a good place to study because the university is well known and attracts many motivated students. The atmosphere is supportive, and I met several classmates who are very hardworking and helpful.

제안: State one specific change and explain briefly why it matters. Use correct conditional or modal structures ("I would like the faculty to invest more in practical training and laboratory work"). Complete your reason and avoid trailing off.

예시: Yes, I would like my faculty to invest more in practical training and laboratory facilities because most of our courses were theoretical and more hands-on practice would improve our clinical skills.

제안: Provide a clear, concise plan in one topic sentence, then add one specific detail about why or what you hope to gain. Use correct terms ("subspecialty" or "specialist training") and smooth linking to avoid repetition.

예시: I plan to pursue subspecialty training in neurological rehabilitation in Singapore. I hope to learn advanced techniques for treating patients with neurological conditions and gain exposure to international clinical standards.

× I currently working at a hospital UMM officer and I graduated that my rehabilitation training two years ago so I have been practicing as a specialist for two years.

✓ I am currently working as an officer at UMM Hospital, and I completed my rehabilitation training two years ago, so I have been practicing as a specialist for two years.

Missing auxiliary verb 'am' for present continuous and awkward word order; 'working at a hospital UMM officer' is incorrect phrase structure. Use 'working as an officer at UMM Hospital'. Also 'graduated that my rehabilitation training' is incorrect — use 'completed my rehabilitation training'. Keep tenses consistent: present continuous for current job and present perfect continuous for practising duration. Suggestion: Include the appropriate auxiliary verb for present continuous and reorder job title and workplace; replace 'graduated' with 'completed' for training.

× Actually, I'm working, but I completed my rehabilitation training programs from Faculty of Medicine of Sirat Hospital and when I was in high school I studied at.

✓ Actually, I'm working, but I completed my rehabilitation training programs at the Faculty of Medicine of Sirat Hospital, and when I was in high school I studied at [school name].

Sentence is incomplete and has incorrect preposition 'from' for institutions; also missing the name after 'studied at'. Use 'at the Faculty of Medicine' and provide the school name or finish clause. Keep conjunction 'and' to join clauses properly. Suggestion: Use 'at' for institutions, include the missing information, and ensure clauses are complete.

× Yes, my university is well known and there are full of many intelligent students in my faculty, so I have met many smart friends and the atmosphere.

✓ Yes, my university is well known, and there are many intelligent students in my faculty, so I have met many smart friends and enjoyed the atmosphere.

'there are full of many' is ungrammatical: 'full of' cannot combine with 'there are'. Use 'there are many' or 'the faculty is full of many'. Also the clause 'and the atmosphere' is incomplete; add a verb to describe what you experienced ('enjoyed the atmosphere'). Suggestion: Use 'there are many' or 'is full of', and complete the final clause with a verb.

× Yes, I want my faculty would invest more on practicing methods or experiments because we did a lot of theory lessons but.

✓ Yes, I want my faculty to invest more in practical methods and experiments because we did a lot of theory lessons.

Incorrect modal/conditional construction 'I want my faculty would invest' — after 'want' use the infinitive 'to invest'. Preposition 'on' is wrong here; use 'invest in'. 'Practicing methods' is awkward; use 'practical methods'. Remove trailing 'but' or complete the clause. Suggestion: Use 'want + object + to + verb', use 'invest in', and ensure sentence is complete.

× I would like to pursue my Subs specialists in Singapore. I want to study about rehabilitation in neurology department. I would like to learn more about neurology.

✓ I would like to pursue my subspecialty in Singapore. I want to study rehabilitation in the neurology department. I would like to learn more about neurology.

'Subs specialists' is incorrect word form and spacing — use 'subspecialty' (singular) or 'subspecialties'. 'Study about' is incorrect; use 'study' or 'study rehabilitation in'. Missing definite article 'the' before 'neurology department'. Tense/modal 'would like' is fine for future intentions. Suggestion: Use the correct noun 'subspecialty', remove 'about' after 'study', and include 'the' before specific departments.