Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Говорите более уверенно и естественно: избегайте наполнителей («uh», «honestly» в начале) и повторов. Начинайте с чёткого топик‑предложения, затем кратко добавьте одну деталь (например, главную специальность или уровень). Ограничьте ответ до 2–3 предложений и используйте подходящую лексику («I study», «major in», «language school»).

예시: I'm a student. I study foreign languages, majoring in English at an international language school.

제안: Улучшите связность и конкретность: используйте Present Perfect для продолжительного действия правильно и избегайте противоречивых фраз («not only on a regular basis»). Дайте одну-две конкретные детали (например, duration, subjects) и применяйте связки («and», «but», «although»).

예시: I've been studying at UH International Language School for three years, mainly focusing on English, but I also take occasional Thai lessons.

제안: Сократите повторения и исправьте грамматику: используйте корректные формы времени и числа («for three years», «almost everything»). Дайте одно-чёткое мнение и 1–2 конкретных примера, почему вы так думаете. Избегайте незавершённых предложений.

예시: In my opinion it's an excellent school. I've studied there for three years and the teachers are very supportive; the school also offers useful resources like modern classrooms and extra practice sessions.

제안: Сформулируйте идею ясно и грамотно: сначала ответьте прямо, затем объясните причину с подходящими связками («however», «because», «so»). Исправьте условную форму («if I had the opportunity»). Один-два предложения будет достаточно.

예시: Not really, although if I had the chance I would change the school's location because it's far from my home and I spend a lot of time commuting each morning.

제안: Будьте более конкретны и уверены: вместо повторов и неуверенных слов («honestly», «actually», «I don't have any») скажите, что вы рассматриваете и почему. Упомяните возможные направления и временные рамки. Используйте связки («however», «at the moment», «perhaps»).

예시: At the moment I haven't made firm plans, but I'm considering continuing my studies in applied linguistics or taking a one-year exchange program to improve my English and gain international experience.

× Honestly, I'm a student and I'm studying uh, foreign languages uh, especially English in in uh learning school.

✓ Honestly, I'm a student and I'm studying foreign languages, especially English, at a language school.

The sentence has redundancy and awkward word order. Use 'studying X at a school' not 'in learning school'. Remove filler 'uh' and duplicate 'in'. Use commas to set off 'especially English'. Provide clearer preposition 'at' for institutions.

× I have been studying in UH international language school.

✓ I have been studying at UH International Language School.

Use the preposition 'at' with the name of a school or institution. Capitalize the proper noun 'International Language School'. 'In' is incorrect for named institutions.

× I study English and I uh, sometimes I'm trying to learn Thai, but not very often and not only on a regular basis.

✓ I study English and sometimes I try to learn Thai, but not very often and not on a regular basis.

Use simple present 'I try' for habitual actions rather than present continuous 'I'm trying'. Remove filler 'uh'. 'Not only on a regular basis' is incorrect phrase; use 'not on a regular basis'.

× From my perspective, it's the best place for studying.

✓ From my perspective, it's the best place to study.

Use the infinitive 'to study' after 'place' rather than the gerund 'for studying' to sound natural in English.

× I have been studying here already three-year and I can say it that this school provides almost every everything for your for your successful education.

✓ I have been studying here for three years, and I can say that this school provides almost everything for a successful education.

Use 'for three years' with present perfect continuous. 'Three-year' is a compound adjective and needs a noun, so use plural 'years'. Remove duplicate words 'every everything' and 'for your for your'. Use article 'a' with 'successful education'. Omit unnecessary 'it' after 'say'.

× The teachers are brilliant and.

✓ The teachers are brilliant.

The sentence was left incomplete with a trailing conjunction 'and'. Remove the conjunction to form a complete sentence or finish the second clause.

× Nevertheless, I if I would have same opportunity, maybe I would change the location because it's far away from my house that's why I need to spend more time to get there in the morning.

✓ Nevertheless, if I had the same opportunity, maybe I would change the location because it's far from my house, and I need to spend more time getting there in the morning.

Use correct second conditional: 'if I had' not 'if I would have'. Include definite article 'the' before 'same opportunity'. Use 'far from' rather than 'far away from my house'. Use gerund 'getting' after 'spend time'. Add comma and conjunction for clarity.

× Honestly, I can't give you the strict answer on this question because actually I still don't know about my future plans.

✓ Honestly, I can't give you a definite answer to this question because I still don't know my future plans.

Use 'definite' rather than 'strict' for clarity. Use preposition 'to' with 'answer to a question'. Omit unnecessary 'actually'. 'Know about my future plans' should be 'know my future plans' for natural phrasing.

× I don't have any.

✓ I don't have any plans.

The pronoun 'any' needs a noun to reference; specify 'plans' to make the sentence complete and clear.

× I have different opportunities in the nearest future, but I still don't feel confidence about them.

✓ I have various opportunities in the near future, but I still don't feel confident about them.

Use 'various' for plural noun 'opportunities'. 'Nearest future' is unidiomatic; use 'near future'. Use adjective 'confident' rather than noun 'confidence' after 'feel'.