Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more grammatical: start with a concise topic sentence, correct verb forms, and avoid unclear words. Use one or two supporting sentences with linking words and specific details (e.g., types of projects you like). Keep it to under five sentences.

예시: I'm a third-year university student majoring in interior design. I chose this course because I enjoy creating functional and attractive spaces. For example, I like designing residential interiors with efficient layouts and small commercial cafés that need cozy atmospheres.

제안: Give a direct, grammatical response: name the university and its location, then add one clear supporting detail. Avoid tense mistakes and vague phrases. Use linking words (e.g., 'and', 'also') to connect ideas and be specific about what Wenzhou is known for.

예시: I study at King University, which is located in my hometown, Wenzhou, in Southeast China. Wenzhou is a coastal city known for its scenic mountains and excellent fresh seafood, and the campus has pleasant sea breezes.

제안: Respond directly and avoid filler words. Provide one topic sentence then two specific supporting details with linking words. Correct tense and phrasing when mentioning awards and features.

예시: Yes, it is a great place to study. The campus has lots of attractive natural scenery and a large central lake in front of the library, which makes studying peaceful. Also, the library received an international design award last year, so it has modern facilities inside.

제안: Answer succinctly with correct grammar. Use a topic sentence then one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb patterns (e.g., 'should to changing').

예시: No, I wouldn't change anything about my school. The infrastructure and equipment are already good, and I appreciate the resources the university provides for students, such as well-equipped studios and workshops.

제안: Give a clear, direct plan statement and use correct forms ('after I graduate', 'postgraduate degree'). If you want to change fields, explain the reason and how it connects to your current studies. Use linking words to show sequence and purpose.

예시: After I graduate, I plan to pursue a postgraduate degree, possibly in education. I am considering education because I want to teach interior design in the future, so further study would help me gain teaching skills and qualifications.

× I'm a university student, major interior design.

✓ I'm a university student, majoring in interior design.

The original sentence omits the gerund form 'majoring' and the preposition 'in' required to link 'major' to the subject. Use 'majoring in' to indicate field of study. Also 'interior design' is a noun phrase that needs this structure.

× I choose this course because I enjoy creating functional, attractive space and IHOP work on residential or commercial projects.

✓ I chose this course because I enjoy creating functional, attractive spaces and I hope to work on residential or commercial projects.

The context refers to a past decision, so 'chose' (past tense) is appropriate. 'space' should be plural 'spaces' to match general meaning. 'IHOP' appears to be a typo; likely 'I hope' meaning future intention. Use 'I hope to work' to express that intention.

× Well, I studied in you went to King University and which is located in my hometown.

✓ Well, I studied at King University, which is located in my hometown.

Use preposition 'at' for studying at an institution. The phrase 'you went to' is incorrect insertion and must be removed. Use a relative clause 'which is located...' to give location. 'Studied' is correct past tense for describing attendance.

× Wenzhou is a very beautiful coastal city in Southeast China.

✓ Wenzhou is a very beautiful coastal city in southeast China.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable but 'Southeast China' is usually lowercased as 'southeast China' unless part of a proper name. No tense change needed; kept present simple for general fact.

× And I think Wenzhou is very famous for the before natural scenery like in the mountain and some fresh seafood.

✓ And I think Wenzhou is very famous for its natural scenery, like the mountains, and for its fresh seafood.

'Before' is incorrect here; remove it. Use possessive 'its' to refer to Wenzhou's scenery. Use plural 'mountains' and article 'the' or no article depending on context. Separate two factors with 'and for'.

× You know, in my school there are lots of beautiful natural scenery and also a very large, umm, large central lake in front of our library.

✓ You know, on my campus there is a lot of beautiful natural scenery and a very large central lake in front of our library.

Use 'on my campus' or 'at my school' rather than 'in my school'. 'Scenery' is uncountable, so use 'a lot of' or 'much' rather than 'lots of' with 'scenery'. Use singular 'there is' for uncountable noun plus singular lake; avoid repetitive 'large'.

× And uh, our library also won award there from French one year ago and, uh, inside.

✓ And our library also won an award from France one year ago.

Add indefinite article 'an' before 'award'. 'From French' is incorrect; use 'from France' to indicate the awarding country or 'a French organization' if appropriate. Remove extraneous 'there' and 'inside'. Keep past tense 'won' for event one year ago.

× No, definitely not. I I don't think my school should to changing anything because I think the infrastructure and the equipment are good enough and I'm very enjoying the everything they the school of provided for us now.

✓ No, definitely not. I don't think my school should change anything because the infrastructure and the equipment are good enough and I'm very happy with everything the school provides for us now.

'Should to changing' is incorrect; use base verb 'should change'. 'I'm very enjoying' is incorrect; use adjective 'I'm very happy' or 'I enjoy'. 'the everything they the school of provided' is garbled; correct to 'everything the school provides' using present simple for general provision. Maintain consistent tense and word order.

× So I don't think I need to change.

✓ So I don't think anything needs to change.

Original is understandable but slightly awkward. Use impersonal construction 'anything needs to change' for clarity; maintain present simple to state current opinion.

× Well for my future study plan, I'm a third year student now so maybe after graduate from university I will continue to pursue a post graduation degree to and I'm now I'm studying interior design. I'm changing to education for pursue another.

✓ Well, for my future study plans: I'm a third-year student now, so maybe after graduating from university I will continue to pursue a postgraduate degree. I am currently studying interior design, but I may switch to education to pursue another degree.

Use 'after graduating' (gerund) or 'after I graduate' for future time. 'Post graduation degree' should be 'postgraduate degree'. 'Third year' should be hyphenated as 'third-year' when used as an adjective. Use 'currently' for present continuous. 'I'm changing to education for pursue another' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'I may switch to education to pursue another degree' to express future intention. Maintain future/modal 'may' or 'will' appropriately.