Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 句子结构混乱，语法和词汇使用不准确（如 specialise, repay），表达冗长且重复。回答应直接说清身份并简短说明专业和目标，句子不超过5句，使用连贯词汇并注意时态和动词形式。可练习把长句拆成主句和补充信息，纠正动词用法（e.g. specialise → specialize/specialise in； repay → research? 或 prepare）。

예시: I am a student at the University of Guangdong. I am studying Chemical Energy Engineering and preparing for further studies. Currently I conduct research related to my major to gain more experience.

제안: 表达有观点但语法与用词不准（'whatever I want to learn last'，'The last day I go there were Friday'），时态和语序错误。应先给主题句说明地点，然后用1–2句具体细节并用连接词（e.g. because, so）。注意时间表达（e.g. last time I went was Friday）。

예시: I usually study at the university library because it is quiet and comfortable. Last time I went there was on Friday when I needed to finish some assignments.

제안: 回答总体明确但部分表达不完整（最后一词缺失）且用词有些不自然（'significant place to achieve my academic performance'）。建议使用更自然的表达并提供具体原因，注意句子完整性和连贯连接词（e.g. because, so）。

예시: Yes, definitely. The library helps me improve my studies because I can borrow many reference books and use quiet study rooms. As a result, I can concentrate and finish my assignments there.

제안: 回答含混且用词严重错误（'violent' 用错，意思相反），句子结构不完整，表达重复。需要先直接回答是否想改变，然后给1–2个具体原因，使用正确词汇（quiet, stable）并避免矛盾。

예시: No, I wouldn't like to change my study place. I prefer a stable and quiet environment because it helps me concentrate and study more efficiently.

제안: 内容清晰且相关，表达接近完整但句末不完整（'to' 之后缺内容）且可更具体说明专业或时间。建议在主题句后用一两句具体细节（which subject, when, why）并完成结尾。

예시: I plan to pursue a master's degree in Hong Kong because universities there have strong programs and good internship opportunities. After completing my master's, I hope to find work in the region to gain industry experience.

× Actually, I am a student at the University of Guangdong and I am preparing for further learning specialize my major chemical energy engineering and so I am do a lot of research and repay.

✓ Actually, I am a student at the University of Guangdong and I am preparing for further study to specialize in my major, Chemical Energy Engineering, so I am doing a lot of research and revision.

句子结构混乱并有多个动词和短语使用不当。需要：1）将“further learning”改为更常用的“further study”；2）“specialize my major”应为“specialize in my major”；3）专业名称首字母大写并用逗号隔开以明确界定；4）“I am do”应为进行时“I am doing”；5）“repay”用词错误，应为“revision”（复习）或“review”。建议把长句拆成更清晰的短语，动词搭配注意固定结构。

× It is a place where it's very quiet and comfortable to learn whatever I want to learn last.

✓ It is a place where it's very quiet and comfortable to learn whatever I wanted to learn last time.

原句时态和时间状语不一致。句中出现“last”，描述过去发生的学习应该使用过去时“wanted”且“last”应改为“last time”以表示具体时间。建议时态与时间状语保持一致。

× The last day I go there were Friday.

✓ The last day I went there was Friday.

原句有时态和主谓不一致问题。描述过去去图书馆应使用过去式“went”。此外，“The last day ... were Friday”主语单数，应使用单数动词“was”。建议主谓一致且使用正确过去时。

× Yes, definitely. It's a significant place to achieve my academic performance. I can borrow many reference books there, and I can finish my assignments on the.

✓ Yes, definitely. It's an important place for improving my academic performance. I can borrow many reference books there, and I can finish my assignments there.

句子用词和结构不当：1）“significant”在此处不如“important”自然；2）“to achieve my academic performance”语法错误，改为“for improving my academic performance”；3）“on the.”不完整，应为“there”。建议使用合适的介词短语并完成句子结构。

× Actually, I am not a person want to change my place to study because I think a good place to study must be quieter and violent, so I find the places I would not like to change many times. Uh, I like the stable places and.

✓ Actually, I am not a person who wants to change my place of study because I think a good place to study must be quiet and calm, so I prefer places I do not need to change often. Uh, I like stable places.

多个问题：1）缺少关系词“who”；2）“want”应与主语一致改为“wants”；3）“place to study”更自然为“place of study”；4）“quieter and violent”词义错误，应为“quiet and calm”；5）“I find the places I would not like to change many times”结构不通顺，改为“prefer places I do not need to change often”；6）句尾不完整，删除多余连词。建议使用正确关系从句，动词形式一致，选择合适形容词并保持句子完整。

× I plan to pursue a master's degree in Hong Kong because the universities there have strong programmes and good internship opportunities. After masters, I will plan to work in the region to.

✓ I plan to pursue a master's degree in Hong Kong because the universities there have strong programmes and good internship opportunities. After my master's, I plan to work in the region.

句子末尾结构错误和冗余：1）“After masters”应为“After my master's”或“After I finish my master's”；2）“I will plan to”不自然且重复，改为“I plan to”；3）句尾多余“to”应去掉。建议用简洁正确的将来计划表达，如“plan to do”。