Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は直接的で簡潔ですが、少し詳しさが不足しています。短くてもよいので、仕事の内容や働き方（例：勤務先、専門分野、勤務時間など）を加えることで、より自然で情報豊かな返答になります。また、文法と発音が明確であることを確認してください。

예시: I work as a lawyer at a mid-sized firm specializing in corporate law. I usually handle contract disputes and provide legal advice to small businesses, which keeps me quite busy during the week.

제안: 文が途切れていたり不自然な語順があり、明確さが欠けています。まずは一つの主文で直接答え、その後に理由をリンクワード（because / since / as）で繋げて詳細を述べてください。句や節は完全な文にし、不要な言い換えは避けます。発音や流暢さのために短く論理的な文を練習しましょう。

예시: I study at home every day because I find it easier to concentrate there. For example, in a café or library I get distracted by conversations and background noise, so I prefer the quiet of my flat.

제안: 答えは概ね内容を伝えていますが、文法のミス（'for us to study' や文の途中でのピリオド）が目立ち、言い換えが繰り返されています。まず肯定の短い主文を作り、次に一つか二つの具体例を linking word（because / for example）で示してください。語の重複は避け、より自然な表現を使いましょう。

예시: Yes, my home is an excellent place to study because it's quiet and free from interruptions. For instance, there are no people talking or phones ringing, so I can focus and finish tasks faster.

제안: 意味は伝わりますが、文法と語順が不自然であり、‘don't like make changes’の表現が誤っています。まずは明確な主文で好みを述べ、その後に理由を because でつなぎ、具体的な時間の節約やその利点を説明してください。短い完全な文で練習すると改善します。

예시: No, I wouldn't like to change my study place because commuting to another location wastes time. I'd rather use that time to study or prepare for exams.

제안: 意図は明確ですが、語句の重複（'going going'）や前置詞の誤用（'study about law in UK'）があります。まず将来の計画を一文で述べ、次にそのために何をしているか（具体的な学習方法や目標）を付け加えてください。linking words（so / therefore / to）を使うとより自然です。

예시: I plan to study law in the UK in the near future, so I'm preparing by improving my English. For example, I study legal vocabulary and practice writing essays every day to reach the required level.

× I study at home every day because I don't like to study outside such as library or cafe. I can't concentrate when. The other people.

✓ I study at home every day because I don't like to study outside, such as in a library or a cafe. I can't concentrate when there are other people.

Sentence contains errors with article/preposition use and sentence structure. 'library' and 'cafe' need articles and the preposition 'in' before them. The fragment 'I can't concentrate when. The other people.' is ungrammatical; correct structure is 'I can't concentrate when there are other people.' This uses present simple tense correctly and fixes subject-verb agreement with 'there are'. Suggestion: combine ideas into one coherent sentence and include needed articles and prepositions.

× Yes, my home is good for us to study because. There are no distractions such as people talking or chatting or phones ringing. I can concentrate in silence at my home.

✓ Yes, my home is a good place for me to study because there are no distractions, such as people talking, chatting, or phones ringing. I can concentrate in silence at home.

Original has sentence fragments and article errors. 'Yes, my home is good for us to study because.' is a fragment; it should be a full clause. Use 'a good place for me to study' (article and correct person) rather than 'good for us to study'. Combine 'because there are no distractions' into same sentence. Also remove redundant 'my' before 'home'. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and ensure pronoun matches speaker ('me' rather than 'us') unless referring to others.

× I don't like. Make changes because it takes a few time to move to other place. I want to spend this time for studying.

✓ I don't want to make changes because it takes a little time to move to another place. I want to spend that time studying.

Original has fragments and wrong modal/verb forms. 'I don't like. Make changes' should be 'I don't want to make changes.' Use 'a little time' not 'a few time', and 'another place' instead of 'other place'. 'Spend this time for studying' is awkward; 'spend that time studying' is natural. Suggestion: use 'want to' for desires, 'a little' for uncountable time, and 'another' for singular places.

× My problem is going going abroad to study. I want to study about law in UK so I study English every day for studying abroad.

✓ My plan is to go abroad to study. I want to study law in the UK, so I study English every day to prepare for studying abroad.

Multiple issues: 'going going abroad' is a repetition and wrong structure; use 'plan is to go abroad' or 'I am going to go abroad'. 'Study about law' should be 'study law'. Include the definite article 'the' before 'UK'. 'for studying abroad' is awkward; 'to prepare for studying abroad' or 'to study abroad' is better. Tenses: present simple 'I study English every day' is fine to express habitual action. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use correct collocations ('study law'), include articles before country names that require them, and use infinitive phrases for purpose.