Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更直接、语法更准确，并使用更地道的表达来介绍专业和研究对象。避免重复词、口头语（如 uh）并把句子控制在最多五句内。可以先用一句话说明身份和专业，接着简短列举专业涉及的产品类别并举一两个具体例子。

예시: I'm a university student majoring in industrial design. I focus on designing everyday products, such as stationery like pencils and brushes, as well as consumer electronics like laptops. I also study vehicle and transportation design occasionally.

제안: 回答要简洁并避免重复。直接说学校名称和学院，注意冠词和词序。可以补充一句地点或年级，但不要反复重复同一信息。

예시: I study at Beijing University of Technology in the College of Industrial Design. I'm currently in my third year of the undergraduate program.

제안: 回答要结构清晰：先给出直接答案（Yes/No），然后用一两句具体理由支持。注意用词准确（e.g. 'modern facilities', 'spacious', 'not crowded'），避免含糊或不正确的词（如 'bread'）。保持句子简短且连贯。

예시: Yes, it's a great place to study. The campus is spacious and not crowded, and the library is large with plenty of study areas and resources. The modern facilities also make it comfortable for students to work on projects.

제안: 先直接回答是否希望改变，然后给出具体且清晰的改进建议。用词准确描述问题（如 'air conditioning' 或 'ventilation'），说明影响和建议的解决办法。避免重复和不完整的句子。

예시: Overall I'm satisfied, but I would improve the air conditioning system. Because it's centrally controlled, students can't adjust it and sometimes classrooms are too hot or cold. I would suggest installing local thermostats or allowing limited student control to make learning environments more comfortable.

제안: 先明确未来计划（例如继续攻读硕士），然后具体说明研究方向（如交互设计）和原因或目标。避免重复、语法错误和不完整结构，使用清晰的短句并给出一两个具体目标。

예시: I plan to continue my studies in design by pursuing a master's degree. I want to specialize in interaction design to work on user-centred digital products, and I hope to gain more research and practical experience in UX and interface design.

× I am a student and my major is industry design which probably for a design for product such as some daily stuff uh a pencil or a brush or or computer and even the car is include.

✓ I am a student and my major is industrial design, which is about designing products such as daily items like a pencil, a brush, a computer, or even a car.

句子结构混乱，信息堆砌且从句连接不当。应把专业名称改为常用的形容词形式“industrial design”，并用定语从句清晰说明专业内容；列举项之间用逗号分隔并使用并列连词“or”。建议把长句拆成更清晰的短语或使用标点使逻辑更明确。

× Well, I study in university now and it is a a Beijing industry university, Yeah. I study in the College of the industry University, yeah.

✓ Well, I am studying at a university now; it's a Beijing Institute of Technology. I study in the College of Industrial Design.

介词搭配不当。“study at a university/ study in the college”更常见；机构名称应使用正确名词（如 institute、university）并且专业学院名称要符合习惯说法。建议使用“study at/ in”与固定搭配。

× Actually, yes, for the motor facilities it is a very big enough and the college is the campus is always not crowded and the library is always bread and and so wide.

✓ Actually, yes. The sports facilities are large enough, the campus is usually not crowded, and the library is bright and very spacious.

形容词或副词使用不当："big enough"位置和搭配需调整，"motor facilities"用词不准，应为"sports"或"sports/motor"视具体；"bread"是拼写错误，应为"bright"。并列结构需要并列连词和正确的副词（usually, very）。建议检查词汇准确性并调整形容词顺序和位置。

× So we can learn that and.

✓ So we can study there.

句子不完整且冠词使用不明。原句“learn that and”逻辑不通，应改为常用表达“study there”。简化并补全句子以符合语法。

× Well, it is good question actually I think they are good enough. But if I have to choose, it may be the air container have to close sometimes because this is a central container so the student can't close it every time. It is controlled by by schools, so it is sometimes.

✓ Well, that's a good question. Actually, I think the facilities are good enough. But if I have to pick one problem, it would be that the air conditioning sometimes stays on because it's centralized, so students can't turn it off themselves — it's controlled by the school.

句子结构混乱，多处名词用词不准（"air container"应为"air conditioning"或"AC"），主谓不一致（"air container have"应为"it has"或"it would"），以及重复词。需重组句子，使用正确名词并保持主谓一致。建议学习常见设施词汇并练习把想法分成主句和从句。

× Well I I may be always to study design major and I am I am a playing a more higher education now such as always it also be in in design area and it is focused on interact design.

✓ Well, I will probably continue studying design; I am pursuing higher education now in the field of design, focusing on interaction design.

时态和动词形式混乱。原句使用了“may be always to study”不符合英语表达。应使用将来或现在进行表达未来学习计划（will probably continue / am pursuing）。此外“more higher education”是不正确的比较级与冠词搭配，改为“higher education”。建议：用清晰的时态（will / am + -ing）表达计划，避免重复和错误比较级。