Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ như "hand on experience" nên là "hands-on experience" và "Plan work and study" nên là "Balancing work and study". Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác và từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I'm currently a university student and also work part-time as a teaching assistant at an English center. This job gives me hands-on experience and allows me to apply what I've learned in class. Balancing work and study is challenging, but it has helped me improve my time management and multitasking skills.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không rõ nghĩa, ví dụ như "helped me to help me" bị lặp lại và "connect UH with people" không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I study English at the University of Foreign Languages. I enjoy my major because it helps me improve my communication skills and allows me to meet people from different countries, which broadens my cultural understanding.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác và có lỗi ngữ pháp như "the environment very dynamic" thiếu động từ và "teachers are here is a very helpful" sai cấu trúc. Bạn nên luyện tập sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và chính xác hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu.

예시: Yes, it's definitely a great place to study because the environment is very dynamic and interactive. The teachers are very helpful and always willing to assist me whenever I have a problem.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu, ví dụ như "let this facility infrastructures are to be improved" và "better story room and fast. The Internet would have students of concentrate and asset resort more easily". Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh.

예시: I think everything is quite good at my study place. However, I would like the facilities to be improved, such as having better study rooms and faster internet. This would help students concentrate better and access resources more easily.

제안: Câu trả lời có một số lỗi nghiêm trọng như "bachelor disgrace" thay vì "bachelor's degree" và câu "I enjoy having already improved their language skills" không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác, đồng thời diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn.

예시: I am going to earn my bachelor's degree soon, and after that, I plan to work as an English teacher. I have always been passionate about teaching because I enjoy helping students improve their language skills. This career will allow me to share my knowledge and make a positive impact on students' lives.

× It's a great way for me to gain hand on experience and put what I have learned into practice.

✓ It's a great way for me to gain hands-on experience and put what I have learned into practice.

The phrase 'hand on experience' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'hands-on experience' which is a compound adjective describing practical experience.

× Plan work and study isn't easy, but it's really helped me to develop time management and multitasking skill.

✓ Balancing work and study isn't easy, but it's really helped me to develop time management and multitasking skills.

The word 'skill' should be plural 'skills' because it refers to multiple abilities. Also, 'Plan work and study' is awkward; 'Balancing work and study' is more natural.

× I'm currently a student at University of Foreign Language majoring in English.

✓ I'm currently a student at the University of Foreign Language majoring in English.

The name of the university requires the definite article 'the' before it to be grammatically correct.

× I really enjoy my majors because it helped me to help me enhance my communication skills and allow me to connect UH with people from many different country with UH brought in my cultural understanding.

✓ I really enjoy my major because it has helped me to enhance my communication skills and allowed me to connect with people from many different countries, which has broadened my cultural understanding.

'Majors' should be singular 'major' as the student studies one field. 'Country' should be plural 'countries' to match 'many different'. Also, sentence structure and verb tenses were corrected for clarity.

× I really enjoy my majors because it helped me to help me enhance my communication skills and allow me to connect UH with people from many different country with UH brought in my cultural understanding.

✓ I really enjoy my major because it has helped me to enhance my communication skills and allowed me to connect with people from many different countries, which has broadened my cultural understanding.

The pronoun 'UH' is incorrect and unclear; it should be replaced with 'with' or omitted. Also, repeated phrases were removed for clarity.

× Yes, it's definitely a great place to study because the environment very dynamic and interactive and the teachers are here is a very helpful and they're willing to give me a hand whenever I have problem.

✓ Yes, it's definitely a great place to study because the environment is very dynamic and interactive, and the teachers here are very helpful and willing to give me a hand whenever I have a problem.

Missing verb 'is' after 'environment'. 'Are here is' is incorrect; should be 'teachers here are'. Also, 'a problem' needs the article 'a'.

× Yes, it's definitely a great place to study because the environment very dynamic and interactive and the teachers are here is a very helpful and they're willing to give me a hand whenever I have problem.

✓ Yes, it's definitely a great place to study because the environment is very dynamic and interactive, and the teachers here are very helpful and willing to give me a hand whenever I have a problem.

The phrase 'teachers are here is' is incorrect; it should be 'teachers here are'. Also, 'have problem' needs the article 'a' before 'problem'.

× I think everything is quite good at my study place. However, I would let this facility infrastructures are to be improved, for example better story room and fast. The Internet would have students of concentrate and asset resort more easily.

✓ I think everything is quite good at my study place. However, I would like the facilities and infrastructure to be improved, for example, better study rooms and faster internet. This would help students concentrate and access resources more easily.

The original sentence has multiple structural errors and unclear phrases. 'I would let this facility infrastructures are to be improved' is incorrect; it should be 'I would like the facilities and infrastructure to be improved'. 'Story room' should be 'study rooms'. 'Fast. The Internet would have students of concentrate and asset resort more easily' is unclear and corrected to 'faster internet. This would help students concentrate and access resources more easily'.

× Uh, I'm going to earn my bachelor disgrace soon, and after that, I plan to apply for a job as an English teacher.

✓ Uh, I'm going to earn my bachelor's degree soon, and after that, I plan to apply for a job as an English teacher.

The phrase 'bachelor disgrace' is incorrect; the correct term is 'bachelor's degree'.

× I have always been passionate about teaching because I enjoy having already improved their language skills.

✓ I have always been passionate about teaching because I enjoy helping others improve their language skills.

The phrase 'having already improved their language skills' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'helping others improve their language skills' to express the intended meaning.

× This career will allow me to share my knowledge and make a positive impact on student life.

✓ This career will allow me to share my knowledge and make a positive impact on students' lives.

'Student life' should be plural possessive 'students' lives' to indicate the lives of multiple students.