Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够直接，句子结构不完整，表达不自然。建议直接回答问题，并用完整句子表达。

예시: I am currently a student in my final year of college and I am about to graduate.

제안: 回答较好，但句子稍显简单。建议增加一些细节，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I am studying at Shandong University, which is one of the best universities in China because of its strong academic reputation.

제안: 回答内容丰富，但部分表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意句子衔接。

예시: Yes, it is a great place to study because it offers excellent academic resources and a positive learning environment. Moreover, the professors are very supportive, and the diverse student community makes studying here enjoyable.

제안: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词，并明确表达观点。

예시: Yes, although the university is good, I think the facilities are a bit old. Therefore, I hope the school can replace them with new ones in the future.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和口语填充词，表达不够流畅。建议去除多余词汇，使用正确语法，并清晰表达目的。

예시: I plan to study abroad for a higher degree, which is why I am taking the IELTS test to apply to foreign universities.

× I mean my final year of college, getting about to graduate.

✓ I am in my final year of college and about to graduate.

原句缺少谓语动词，导致句子结构不完整。应补充完整的谓语，使句子表达清晰。

× I'm studying in one of the best universities in China, that's Shandong University.

✓ I'm studying at one of the best universities in China, that's Shandong University.

表示在某个学校学习时，通常用介词'at'，而不是'in'。

× Yes, because it has excellent academic resources and the great learning atmosphere.

✓ Yes, because it has excellent academic resources and a great learning atmosphere.

在名词前使用形容词时，若名词是可数名词单数，需加不定冠词'a'。此处'atmosphere'为可数名词，需加冠词。

× Yes, though everything here is good but not enough yet.

✓ Yes, though everything here is good, it is not enough yet.

'everything'是单数，后面不能直接用'but'连接两个独立句子，应改为完整句子并用逗号分隔。

× The facilities are a little bit old and if possible I hope still school can replace it with a new one.

✓ The facilities are a little bit old and if possible, I hope the school can replace them with new ones.

'facilities'为复数，代词应使用'them'，且'new one'应改为'new ones'以匹配复数。

× I'm planning to go abroad for to study for a higher degree and that's why I'm here taking an IS test because this is my uh ground to apply for universities.

✓ I'm planning to go abroad to study for a higher degree, and that's why I'm here taking an IELTS test because this is my basis to apply for universities.

'for to study'是不正确的搭配，应改为'to study'。此外，'IS test'应为'IELTS test'，'ground'用词不当，改为'basis'更合适。