Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 文法的な誤りを修正し、より自然で簡潔な表現を使うことをお勧めします。また、話の流れを良くするために接続詞を使いましょう。

예시: I am a university student studying politics because I have been interested in this subject since high school.

제안: 文法ミスを直し、場所の説明をより具体的にして、自然な英語表現を使うことが必要です。

예시: I study politics at a university located in Tokyo.

제안: 意味が伝わりにくいため、理由を明確にし、文をつなげて自然な表現にしましょう。

예시: Yes, it is a good place to study because many knowledgeable people about politics are there.

제안: 文が途中で終わっているため、意見を明確にし、文法を正しく使い、理由を具体的に述べることが大切です。

예시: I would like some changes because there are many students studying different subjects, and sometimes it is hard to focus on politics.

제안: 意味が不明瞭な部分を修正し、将来の計画について明確に述べることが必要です。

예시: I am not sure about my exact future plans yet, but since I am interested in politics, I want to continue studying it.

× I'm student and I am university student and I study politics because I was interested in politics when I was high school student.

✓ I'm a student and I am a university student and I study politics because I was interested in politics when I was a high school student.

The nouns 'student' and 'university student' require the indefinite article 'a' when used in singular form. Also, 'high school student' needs 'a' before it. This is because singular countable nouns must be preceded by an article or determiner.

× I'm study at the university and it located Tokyo and I study politics.

✓ I study at the university and it is located in Tokyo and I study politics.

The verb 'study' should be in the simple present tense 'I study' instead of 'I'm study'. The verb 'located' needs the auxiliary verb 'is' to form 'it is located'. Also, the preposition 'in' is required before 'Tokyo' to indicate location.

× I'm study at the university and it located Tokyo and I study politics.

✓ I study at the university and it is located in Tokyo and I study politics.

The preposition 'in' is necessary before 'Tokyo' to correctly indicate the location. Without it, the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× Yes, it is because. There are merely. Person who know about politics.

✓ Yes, it is because there are very few people who know about politics.

The original sentences are fragmented and incorrectly structured. 'Merely' is misused; 'very few' is more appropriate. Also, 'Person' should be plural 'people' to match the context.

× Yes, it is because. There are merely. Person who know about politics.

✓ Yes, it is because there are very few people who know about politics.

The noun 'Person' should be plural 'people' to agree with the plural verb 'are'. Singular and plural agreement is important for grammatical correctness.

× I would like the place where I study to make any changes because there are many students who studies studying many different subjects and.

✓ I would like the place where I study to make some changes because there are many students who study many different subjects.

The verb 'studies' should be 'study' to agree with the plural subject 'students'. Also, 'any changes' is better replaced with 'some changes' in affirmative sentences. The sentence was incomplete and has been corrected for clarity.

× I would like the place where I study to make any changes because there are many students who studies studying many different subjects and.

✓ I would like the place where I study to make some changes because there are many students who study many different subjects.

'Any' is generally used in negative or interrogative sentences, while 'some' is used in affirmative sentences to indicate an unspecified quantity.

× Hmm, I'm not sure about my huge yesterday plans but I am interested in politics and now I am studying politics so I want to continue to study politics.

✓ Hmm, I'm not sure about my future plans but I am interested in politics and now I am studying politics so I want to continue to study politics.

'Yesterday plans' is incorrect because 'plans' refer to future intentions, so 'future plans' is appropriate. 'Huge' is also incorrect in this context and has been removed.