Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答简洁明了，但可以稍微丰富内容，使回答更自然和完整。比如可以简单说明你是哪个阶段的学生。

예시: I am currently a university student, studying in my second year.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达不够准确的问题，建议使用完整且正确的句子，并且说明学校的具体名称和地点。

예시: I am studying at Shenzhen University, which is a small but well-known university in the city.

제안: 回答较好，但可以使用更自然的表达方式，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, definitely. I enjoy the quiet atmosphere there, and moreover, the university offers abundant educational resources.

제안: 回答中有较多的语气词和重复，建议减少填充词，使用更流畅的句子，并且用连接词使表达更清晰。

예시: No, I wouldn't like any changes. I prefer studying in the same place every day because I can leave my computer and study materials there for convenience.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用正确的语法结构，并且表达更具体的计划。

예시: I plan to study abroad to deepen my knowledge in my current field, and I hope to continue working in this area throughout my life.

× Well, I am now studying Shenzhen, UH, in a small university.

✓ Well, I am now studying at Shenzhen University, UH, a small university.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to studying at an institution; the correct preposition is 'at'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by placing 'a small university' after the university name for clarity.

× I want to study abroad to for the my current field and I hope I will study in this field all the time until I died.

✓ I want to study abroad for my current field and I hope I will study in this field all the time until I die.

The phrase 'to for the my current field' contains redundant prepositions and an incorrect article. It should be 'for my current field'. Also, 'until I died' is incorrect because it uses past tense instead of future; it should be 'until I die' to match the intended meaning.