Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时有重复和语法错误，表达不够简洁自然。建议减少重复，注意语法，使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: I am currently a student majoring in architecture, a field I have been passionate about since high school. I find my studies very fulfilling and hope to become a professional architect in the future.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，注意语法，清晰表达地点和特点。

예시: I am currently studying at the Polytechnic University of Catalonia in Barcelona, a beautiful city known for its famous architectural works. The university is also well-regarded for its talented faculty.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词，注意语法，具体描述城市特色。

예시: Yes, it's an excellent place to study, especially for architecture students. The city is famous for Gaudi's masterpieces, and its unique urban design offers great inspiration.

제안: 回答中有重复和口语填充词，表达不够流畅。建议减少重复和填充词，使用更准确的词汇表达观点。

예시: The only change I would suggest is to increase the number of student dormitories, especially for international students, since housing in the city center is limited.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简洁表达未来计划，注意语法和句子结构。

예시: I am passionate about architecture and performed well in my two master's degrees. Therefore, I plan to pursue a PhD under the supervision of my master's thesis professor.

× Currently I'm still a student my my major is architecture and I'm fond of that since I was in high school.

✓ Currently, I'm still a student. My major is architecture and I've been fond of it since I was in high school.

句子中“I'm fond of that since I was in high school”时态不正确，应该用现在完成时表示从过去持续到现在的状态。建议使用“I've been fond of it since I was in high school”。另外，句子缺少标点，导致表达不清。

× At present I'm studying in University of Catalunya Polycyclica in Barcelona.

✓ At present, I'm studying at the University of Catalunya Politécnica in Barcelona.

专有名词前需要加定冠词“the”，表示特指某个大学。介词应使用“at”表示在某个学校学习。

× It's a bit it's a beautiful city where you can see in famous at pieces of architects all around and also the school is famous for a lot of talented.

✓ It's a beautiful city where you can see famous architectural works all around, and the school is famous for having a lot of talented students.

原句中“in famous at pieces of architects”表达混乱，应该用“famous architectural works”来表达著名的建筑作品。句子结构不完整，需调整使表达清晰。

× Besides, there are lots of Asian architectures around the around the street and also the urban designed cities is quite unique as well.

✓ Besides, there are lots of Asian architectural styles around the streets, and the urban design of the city is quite unique as well.

“architectures”用法错误，architecture通常不可数，表示建筑学或建筑风格。应改为“architectural styles”。“cities is”主谓不一致，应改为“city is”。

× Well, the only, only thing that I can think of is that there's, there is not enough dormitory for students.

✓ Well, the only thing I can think of is that there are not enough dormitories for students.

“dormitory”应使用复数形式“dormitories”，因为表示多个宿舍。谓语动词应与复数主语一致，使用“are”。

× but it's also, uh, quite leaded for especially for international students.

✓ but it's also quite limited, especially for international students.

“leaded”用法错误，应为“limited”，表示“有限的”。

× I'm still full of passion for this subject and I did quite well in in my 2 masters, so I'm planning to pursue my PhD degrees in the future with the professor in my in my master thesis program.

✓ I'm still full of passion for this subject and I did quite well in my two master's degrees, so I'm planning to pursue my PhD degree in the future with the professor from my master's thesis program.

“2 masters”应改为“two master's degrees”，表示两个硕士学位。PhD通常用单数“degree”，除非指多个学位。

× I'm planning to pursue my PhD degrees in the future with the professor in my in my master thesis program.

✓ I'm planning to pursue my PhD degree in the future with the professor from my master's thesis program.

“in my master thesis program”应改为“from my master's thesis program”，表示与教授的关系。