Study— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you work or are you a student?
수험생
I'm currently a student at a prestigious university in the South of China, where I am majoring in applied linguistics.
시험관
Where do you study?
수험생
I started at Hwa Chong University which is located in the South of China and it is a well known and prestigious university in this region, famous for its strong academic programs. I really enjoyed my time there because the professors were very supportive.
시험관
Is it a good place to study?
수험생
Yes, it is definitely a good place to study before. The professors here are very supportive both academically and personally. For example, they are always willing to help students with any difficulties, whether it is related to coursework or college life. Moreover, the university provide a quiet and comfortable.
시험관
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
수험생
Yes, I would like some changes. Currently I live in the school dormitory, but it is located outside the campus, which I found both unsafe and inconvenient. For example, the area is quite isolated so it can be risky to return late at night.
시험관
What are your future study plans?
수험생
I'm going to graduate from this university next year, and I plan to apply for PhD programs in other countries like New Zealand and Australia. I believe studying abroad will give me valuable international experience and help me broaden my academic horizons.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
점수: 85.0제안: 回答较为完整且自然，但可以更简洁，避免冗余。例如，去掉“prestigious university”重复信息，直接说明专业和学校位置即可。
예시: I'm a student majoring in applied linguistics at a university in southern China.
Where do you study?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答信息丰富，但句子较长且有些重复。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时避免重复“prestigious university”。
예시: I study at Hwa Chong University in southern China, which is famous for its strong academic programs. I enjoy it because the professors are very supportive.
Is it a good place to study?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答中有语法错误（provide应为provides），句子未完整，且表达不够流畅。建议注意语法和句子完整性，使用连接词使内容更连贯。
예시: Yes, it is a great place to study because the professors are supportive both academically and personally. For instance, they help students with coursework and college life. Moreover, the university provides a quiet and comfortable environment.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
점수: 90.0제안: 回答清晰且具体，表达自然。可以稍微丰富细节，增加连接词使表达更流畅。
예시: Yes, I would like some changes. Currently, I live in the school dormitory outside the campus, which I find unsafe and inconvenient. For example, since the area is quite isolated, it can be risky to return late at night.
What are your future study plans?
점수: 95.0제안: 回答内容丰富且表达流畅，建议可以加入更多具体细节或理由，使答案更具说服力。
예시: I'm going to graduate next year and plan to apply for PhD programs in countries like New Zealand and Australia because studying abroad will provide valuable international experience and broaden my academic horizons.
문법
× Yes, it is definitely a good place to study before.
✓ Yes, it is definitely a good place to study.
句中使用了“before”，但句意是描述现在的情况，使用“before”不合适，应去掉以符合现在时态的表达。
× Moreover, the university provide a quiet and comfortable.
✓ Moreover, the university provides a quiet and comfortable environment.
主语“the university”是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“provides”。此外，句子不完整，缺少名词“environment”来完成表达。
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