Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Apni answer e beshi clear and direct hote paren. Apnar kotha gulo onek bar bar hoise, ar kichu part bujhte kothin. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo shohoje, shothik grammar diye bolte, ar unnecessary filler words (like 'uh') komate. Apnar answer e specific details dite paren, jemon apnar job er kon kon kaj korte hoy.

예시: I work part-time at a law chamber where I assist lawyers with preparing case documents and conducting research. This job helps me gain practical experience related to my law studies.

제안: Apnar answer e filler words onek beshi, ja natural sound komay. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo shothik structure e bolte, ar linking words use korte jate answer ta logical lage. Specific details dite paren university er kon kon features bhalo.

예시: I studied at the University of Asia Pacific, which is a well-known university in Bangladesh. It offers a peaceful environment and excellent facilities that help students focus on their studies and develop their knowledge.

제안: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar filler words onek. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo shothik bhabe complete korte. Linking words use korun jate answer ta coherent hoy. Specific example dite paren teacher der supportive behavior niye.

예시: Yes, it is a great place to study because the environment is calm and comfortable. Moreover, the teachers are very friendly and supportive; for example, they always help students who have difficulties in understanding the lessons.

제안: Apnar answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar sentence structure onek simple. Apni chesta korun answer ta aro natural and fluent korte. Apni kichu linking words use korte paren, ar kichu specific karon dite paren keno apni change korte chan na.

예시: No, I would not like any changes because the university provides all the facilities a student needs. Also, the environment is very supportive, which I believe will continue to benefit future students.

제안: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar sentence incomplete mone hocche. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo shothik bhabe complete korte, ar linking words use korte jate answer ta fluent hoy. Specific details dite paren kon deshe masters korte chan, ba keno abroad jete chan.

예시: I have completed my graduation in law and human rights. My next plan is to pursue a master's degree abroad, possibly in the UK, because I want to gain international experience and improve my knowledge.

× I had to play in Variety's role in my, uh, job, uh, such as assistance with my.

✓ I had to play a variety of roles in my job, such as assisting with tasks.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'play in Variety's role' which is ungrammatical. The phrase should be 'play a variety of roles' to express multiple roles. Also, 'assistance with my' is incomplete and should be 'assisting with tasks' or similar. This correction improves clarity and grammatical structure.

× I do a job in a law chamber associated with court

✓ I work in a law chamber associated with the court

The phrase 'do a job in' is unnatural; 'work in' is the correct collocation. Also, 'associated with court' needs the definite article 'the' before 'court' to specify it. This correction aligns with standard English usage.

× Well, I'm not a student now, but I studied in uh, university named University of Asia Pacific

✓ Well, I'm not a student now, but I studied at a university named University of Asia Pacific

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to studying at an institution; 'at' is the correct preposition. Also, 'a university named' is better than 'university named' to indicate one among many. This correction improves grammatical accuracy.

× it has a, a great atmosphere to read and uh, flourish uh, one's wisdom

✓ it has a great atmosphere for studying and flourishing one's wisdom

The phrase 'atmosphere to read' is awkward; 'atmosphere for studying' is more natural. Also, 'flourish one's wisdom' is unusual; 'flourishing one's wisdom' fits better as a gerund phrase. This correction improves naturalness and grammatical form.

× it gives everything what a student need

✓ it gives everything that a student needs

The phrase 'everything what' is incorrect; 'everything that' is correct. Also, 'student need' lacks subject-verb agreement; it should be 'student needs'. This correction fixes quantifier and agreement errors.

× I am looking for a new journey in the abroad

✓ I am looking for a new journey abroad

The phrase 'in the abroad' is incorrect; 'abroad' is used without an article or preposition. This correction aligns with standard English usage.