Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，学校名称错误，专业表达不准确。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复，并准确表达学校名称和专业。

예시: I am currently a university student at Hainan University, majoring in Environmental Design.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如复数形式使用不当，专业名称表达不准确。建议使用正确的语法和专业名称，并简洁回答。

예시: I study at Hainan University and I am a junior majoring in Environmental Design.

제안: 回答不够清晰，表达混乱，使用了错误的词汇。建议明确表达观点，使用恰当词汇，并给出理由。

예시: Yes, I think it is a great place to study because the university has excellent facilities and the design program is very well organized.

제안: 回答含糊不清，表达不流畅，缺乏具体细节。建议明确指出想要改进的方面，并提供具体细节。

예시: Yes, I would like the school to improve the campus environment, such as adding more green spaces and renovating the dormitory rooms to make them more comfortable.

제안: 回答语法错误多，表达不清晰，缺乏逻辑。建议清晰表达未来计划，使用正确语法，并说明理由。

예시: To be honest, I am not sure about my future plans yet, but I love my major, so I will work hard to do well in my studies.

× Now I'm a junior students.

✓ Now I'm a junior student.

这里的主语是单数第一人称“I”，所以后面的表语“students”应该用单数形式“student”，保持主谓一致。

× My major is development.

✓ My major is development.

此句中“development”作为专业名称，通常前面不加冠词或介词，语法正确，无需修改。

× My manager is environmental design.

✓ My major is environmental design.

这里“manager”应为“major”，表示专业，原词拼写错误，属于词汇使用错误。

× My school is a perfect manager and I think I perfect like uh design, so I choose it.

✓ My school has a perfect major, and I think I really like design, so I chose it.

“manager”应为“major”，且“perfect”用法不当，应改为“perfect major”；“I perfect like”语法错误，应改为“I really like”；“choose”时态应与上下文一致，改为过去式“chose”。

× MMM oh have a little points.

✓ Hmm, oh, I have a few points.

“have a little points”中“little”用于不可数名词，points是可数名词，应使用“a few”。

× For example, I think my school would improve environment and improve my room environment.

✓ For example, I think my school should improve the environment and my room environment.

“improve environment”缺少冠词，应该是“improve the environment”；“would”用法不当，表达建议应使用“should”。

× To be honestly I will not finger a larger for about my future but I I love my manager so I will do homework hard work.

✓ To be honest, I do not have a clear plan for my future, but I love my major, so I will work hard on my homework.

“To be honestly”应为“To be honest”；“finger a larger for about my future”语义不明，推测为“do not have a clear plan for my future”；“manager”应为“major”；“do homework hard work”表达不自然，应改为“work hard on my homework”。