Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use complete sentences and correct grammar, such as articles and verb forms. Also, avoid filler words like 'umm' to sound more natural and confident. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain your reason briefly.

예시: I am a student and currently not working because I want to focus all my time and effort on my university studies. However, I plan to start working in the upcoming semesters.

제안: Avoid repeating words and try to be more specific about what makes your university good. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I study at a university located in the capital city of my country. It offers a high-quality learning environment with excellent lectures and modern classrooms, which makes it one of the best universities here.

제안: Try to avoid general statements like 'the best place' without supporting details. Add specific reasons or examples to support your opinion and use linking words for coherence.

예시: Absolutely. I believe my university is a great place to study because it provides a high-quality learning environment and many opportunities, such as research projects and internships, to help students succeed academically.

제안: Use correct verb tenses and avoid short, informal phrases like 'so yeah'. Also, organize your answer with linking words to make it more coherent.

예시: I have never thought about this, but I don't think I would like any changes at my university. It is located in an excellent area, close to the metro station, so transportation is not a problem. Additionally, being in the city center makes it very convenient.

제안: Use correct verb forms and prepositions. Also, try to be more specific and organize your ideas with linking words to improve clarity and coherence.

예시: I plan to go abroad to study in a different country because it will be a valuable experience. Moreover, I will have the chance to learn about another culture and visit famous sights in that country.

× I am student and I am not working because I want to put all my effort and time in studying in the university.

✓ I am a student and I am not working because I want to put all my effort and time into studying at the university.

The noun 'student' is singular and requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'into' to indicate direction of effort, and 'in the university' is better expressed as 'at the university' to indicate location.

× I am student and I am not working because I want to put all my effort and time in studying in the university.

✓ I am a student and I am not working because I want to put all my effort and time into studying at the university.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'effort and time'; the correct preposition is 'into' to show direction or focus. Also, 'in the university' should be 'at the university' to indicate the place of study.

× Everything there is high level learning environment, lectures, lectures, classrooms and everything there is the best.

✓ Everything there is a high-level learning environment, lectures, classrooms, and everything there is the best.

The phrase 'high level learning environment' needs an article 'a' and a hyphen between 'high' and 'level' to form a compound adjective. Also, 'lectures' is repeated unnecessarily; it should appear only once.

× I want to put all my effort and time in studying in the university.

✓ I want to put all my effort and time into studying at the university.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'into' is used to indicate direction or focus of effort. Also, 'in the university' should be 'at the university' to indicate location.

× I have never think about this, but I don't think that I would like any changes in my university.

✓ I have never thought about this, but I don't think that I would like any changes in my university.

The verb 'think' should be in the past participle form 'thought' after 'have never' to form the present perfect tense correctly.

× It is close to metro station, so transportation isn't problem.

✓ It is close to the metro station, so transportation isn't a problem.

The phrase 'close to metro station' requires the definite article 'the' before 'metro station'. Also, 'transportation isn't problem' needs the indefinite article 'a' before 'problem'.

× I plan to went abroad and study in different country because it will be a brilliant experience for me.

✓ I plan to go abroad and study in a different country because it will be a brilliant experience for me.

After 'plan to', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'went' is incorrect and should be 'go'. Also, 'different country' needs the indefinite article 'a' before it.