Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较简洁，但缺少完整句子结构，且专业名称应使用完整形式。建议使用完整句子并补充更多细节，使回答更自然流畅。

예시: I am currently a student at Nanjing University, where I am majoring in Marketing. I find the subject very interesting because it helps me understand consumer behavior.

제안: 回答中存在重复问题，且表达不够准确，如“waiting parks”应为“quiet parks”。建议避免重复，使用准确词汇，并增加连贯的连接词。

예시: I study at a university in Nanjing, a beautiful city famous for its rich history. Moreover, the city offers many quiet parks where I can relax and enjoy the outdoors.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如“improves quiet environments”应为“has a quiet environment”，且表达不够清晰。建议注意语法，使用正确表达，并丰富细节。

예시: Yes, I believe it is a good place to study because the environment is very quiet. Additionally, I have made many friends there, and relaxing in the park after exams helps me stay focused and motivated.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“where I started”应为“where I study”，且“consider better additional”表达不清。建议使用准确表达并具体说明改进内容。

예시: Yes, I would like the university to make some changes. For instance, adding more small classrooms and comfortable seating areas would provide students with better spaces for studying and group discussions.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“explore my interesting”应为“explore my interests”，且“friendly decision”表达不当。建议注意语法和用词准确性，表达更自然。

예시: I'm not very sure about where I will study in the future. Maybe I will take a gap year to gain some work experience or explore my interests. For now, I want to focus on my studies because I still have plenty of time to make a careful decision.

× I'm currently a student at Nanjing University, major in Marketing.

✓ I'm currently a student at Nanjing University, majoring in Marketing.

这里的“major”应使用动名词形式“majoring”，表示正在进行的动作。

× It gives me many opportunities to enjoy the outdoors, such as waiting parks which help me relax.

✓ It gives me many opportunities to enjoy the outdoors, such as walking in parks which help me relax.

“waiting parks”是错误的搭配，应为“walking in parks”，表示在公园散步。

× Yes, I think this is a good place to study because it improves quiet environments.

✓ Yes, I think this is a good place to study because it has a quiet environment.

“improves quiet environments”表达不当，应改为“has a quiet environment”，表示环境安静。

× Moreover, I can make some friends there and relax in the park after finish my exams.

✓ Moreover, I can make some friends there and relax in the park after finishing my exams.

“after finish”应使用动名词形式“after finishing”，表示动作完成后。

× It's help me stand, focus and motivate.

✓ It helps me stand, focus, and stay motivated.

“It's help”主谓不一致，应为“It helps”；“motivate”应改为“stay motivated”，使表达更自然。

× Yes, I would like the place where I started to make some changes.

✓ Yes, I would like the place where I study to make some changes.

“where I started”时态和语境不符，应为“where I study”，表示现在的学习地点。

× adding small classrooms and comfortable seating areas would help students consider better additional.

✓ adding small classrooms and comfortable seating areas would help students concentrate better.

“consider better additional”表达错误，应为“concentrate better”，表示更好地集中注意力。

× Maybe I will take a gap year to gain some work experience or explore my interesting.

✓ Maybe I will take a gap year to gain some work experience or explore my interests.

“my interesting”应为复数名词“my interests”，表示兴趣爱好。

× For now, I want to focus on my studies because I still have plenty of time to make a friendly decision.

✓ For now, I want to focus on my studies because I still have plenty of time to make a final decision.

“friendly decision”用词不当，应为“final decision”，表示最终决定。