Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn về việc học của bạn.

예시: I am currently a grade 12 student at a top high school in my local area. I study many subjects, which can be stressful at times, but I try to manage my time well.

제안: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng nhiều từ thừa và tiếng ừ, ờ, đồng thời nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn. Hãy thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn.

예시: My school is located in the urban area of Hanoi city, about 15 minutes from the city center. It is a large school with many facilities.

제안: Bạn cần nói rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp. Hãy bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về các câu lạc bộ và sự hỗ trợ của giáo viên để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

예시: Yes, it is a good place to study because my school offers many clubs for students to join, and the teachers are very supportive.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng thì phù hợp và tránh lặp từ. Hãy trình bày ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

예시: If I had the chance, I would organize more activities for students to help them learn life skills and improve their teamwork.

제안: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng nhiều tiếng ừ, ờ và nói rõ ràng, đầy đủ ý. Hãy trình bày kế hoạch học tập tương lai một cách mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn.

예시: As a grade 12 student, my future plan is to take the university entrance exams next year. I feel stressed, but I am preparing hard to succeed.

× I need to study a lot of subject and sometimes I feel stressed.

✓ I need to study a lot of subjects and sometimes I feel stressed.

The noun 'subject' should be plural 'subjects' because 'a lot of' refers to multiple items, so the plural form is required.

× My school located in the urban of Hanoi city, uh, which, which, which takes, uh, maybe 15 minutes to go to the center, uh, because, uh, it is, uh, located in local in urban.

✓ My school is located in the urban area of Hanoi city, which takes maybe 15 minutes to get to the center, because it is located in an urban area.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'My school' and has awkward phrasing. Adding 'is' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× my school have has many club, so that is is to to student to join in uh, and it is MMM and the teacher is really supportive wish.

✓ My school has many clubs, so students can join them, and the teachers are really supportive.

'Have has' is incorrect; 'has' is the correct singular verb for 'my school'. 'Club' should be plural 'clubs' to match 'many'. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. The sentence is also rephrased for clarity.

× If you had a chance, I will organize more activities for students so that they can so that they can join in the activities to raise their uh, to learn more life skill and learn how to collaborate with each other.

✓ If I had a chance, I would organize more activities for students so that they can join the activities to learn more life skills and how to collaborate with each other.

The conditional sentence requires 'would' instead of 'will' after 'If I had a chance' to express a hypothetical situation. Also, 'life skill' should be plural 'life skills'.

× I need to seize umm, at the university entrance exams.

✓ I need to take the university entrance exams.

The verb 'seize' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'take' when referring to exams.