Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有點重複，建議簡潔明確地回答問題，例如直接說 "I'm currently a student." 這樣會讓回答更自然且有效率。

예시: I'm currently a student.

제안: 回答時可以更自然地連接句子，並提供更多細節。例如使用連接詞來使句子更流暢，並描述學校的特色。

예시: I study at Fengshan University in Taichung, Taiwan. It's a small school, which creates a close-knit community.

제안: 回答時可以使用更多連接詞和具體細節，使回答更完整且有說服力。例如說明自習室和圖書館的優點。

예시: Yes, I think it's a good place to study because we have self-study rooms and a well-equipped library, which provide a quiet environment for learning.

제안: 回答中有語法和用詞錯誤，建議簡化句子並使用正確的語法和詞彙，並具體說明想要的改變。

예시: Yes, I would like some changes because having different study areas and better facilities would help me concentrate more on my studies and exams.

제안: 回答中有語法錯誤，建議使用正確的時態和句型，並清楚表達計劃。

예시: Currently, I am a sophomore, and I plan to pursue a master's degree in the Netherlands in 2027.

× I'm currently I'm a student.

✓ I'm currently a student.

The sentence has a redundancy with 'I'm' repeated twice. The correct form is 'I'm currently a student.' which is present tense and clear.

× I study in Fengshan University in Taichung, Taiwan and we are a small school.

✓ I study at Fengshan University in Taichung, Taiwan and it is a small school.

Use 'at' for institutions like universities. Also, 'we are a small school' is incorrect because the student is one person; 'it is a small school' correctly refers to the school as singular.

× I study in Fengshan University in Taichung, Taiwan and we are a small school.

✓ I study at Fengshan University in Taichung, Taiwan and it is a small school.

The preposition 'at' is used for institutions like universities, not 'in'. Also, 'we' should be 'it' to refer to the school.

× Well I would say yes because we have self study rooms and library and other buildings you can go into there to study.

✓ Well, I would say yes because we have self-study rooms, a library, and other buildings where you can go to study.

The sentence lacks commas and articles. 'Self study' should be hyphenated as 'self-study'. 'Library' needs an article 'a'. 'You can go into there' is awkward; 'where you can go to study' is clearer.

× Yes, I would like any changes to be made to the place where I study because different places and different kind of items and stuffs can make me more concentrate on my study, my testing. So I would like to any change.

✓ Yes, I would like some changes to be made to the place where I study because different places and different kinds of items and stuff can help me concentrate more on my study and testing. So I would like some changes.

'Any changes' is less appropriate here; 'some changes' fits better. 'Different kind' should be 'different kinds' to match plural. 'Stuffs' is incorrect; 'stuff' is uncountable. 'Make me more concentrate' should be 'help me concentrate more'. The last sentence is incomplete and corrected accordingly.

× Well currently I'm a sophomore student to junior and I plan to go to get master degrees in 2027 and I want to go to Netherlands to get master degrees.

✓ Well, currently I'm a sophomore student moving to junior, and I plan to get a master's degree in 2027. I want to go to the Netherlands to get a master's degree.

'Sophomore student to junior' is unclear; 'moving to junior' clarifies progression. 'Go to get master degrees' is awkward; 'get a master's degree' is correct. 'Master degrees' should be singular 'master's degree' unless plural is intended. 'Netherlands' requires the definite article 'the'.