Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and avoiding repetition. For example, say "I am currently a first-year student at the Royal University of Phnom Penh, often abbreviated as RUPP, located in Phnom Penh."

예시: I am currently a first-year student at the Royal University of Phnom Penh, often abbreviated as RUPP, located in Phnom Penh.

제안: In English (Cambodia), avoid unclear or incorrect place names and improve sentence structure. You can say, "As I mentioned earlier, I study at the Royal University of Phnom Penh, which is one of the oldest universities in Cambodia."

예시: As I mentioned earlier, I study at the Royal University of Phnom Penh, which is one of the oldest universities in Cambodia.

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to give clear reasons and avoid contradictions. For example, say "Yes, it is a good place to study because it has sufficient equipment for students to practice experiments after class, although the environment could be improved."

예시: Yes, it is a good place to study because it has sufficient equipment for students to practice experiments after class, although the environment could be improved.

제안: In English (Cambodia), be more specific and clear. For example, say "Yes, I would like to improve the parking area because it is very hot during the daytime, making it uncomfortable for students who park their motorcycles."

예시: Yes, I would like to improve the parking area because it is very hot during the daytime, making it uncomfortable for students who park their motorcycles.

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to use smoother sentences and correct prepositions. For example, say "My future study plans include pursuing a master's degree abroad, and possibly continuing to study for a PhD overseas."

예시: My future study plans include pursuing a master's degree abroad, and possibly continuing to study for a PhD overseas.

× Right now I'm student who study at Royal University of Pennsylvania which is called short as OUP in Campbell City and right now I study at year one in the university.

✓ Right now I'm a student who studies at Royal University of Pennsylvania, which is called OUP for short, in Campbell City, and right now I am studying in year one at the university.

The word 'student' is singular and needs the article 'a'. The verb 'study' should be 'studies' to agree with the singular subject 'student'. Also, 'called short as' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'called OUP for short'. 'Study at year one' should be 'studying in year one' to be grammatically correct.

× Like as I mentioned earlier, I study at Olympic which is called along Royal University of located in Lumpy City, one of the oldest university in Cambodia.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I study at Olympic, which is part of Royal University located in Lumpy City, one of the oldest universities in Cambodia.

The phrase 'called along Royal University of' is incorrect; it should be 'part of Royal University'. 'One of the oldest university' should be 'one of the oldest universities' because 'one of the' requires plural noun.

× Yes, I think it's a good place to study because it has enough equipment for the students to practice after their school time where like they can practice the experiment of their study and also the environment is really bad.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good place to study because it has enough equipment for students to practice after school, like conducting experiments related to their studies, but the environment is really bad.

The phrase 'practice the experiment of their study' is awkward; it should be 'conduct experiments related to their studies'. Also, 'after their school time' is better as 'after school'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Yeah, sure. I would like to change the place where I live like improve better such as it's about the parking place because I think the parking place is really hot.

✓ Yeah, sure. I would like to improve the place where I live, such as the parking area, because I think the parking area is really hot.

The phrase 'change the place where I live like improve better' is incorrect; 'improve' alone is sufficient without 'better'. 'Parking place' is better expressed as 'parking area'.

× Like when I park the motor or or student park the motor is really fun during the daytime.

✓ When I park my motorbike, or when students park their motorbikes, it is really hot during the daytime.

The word 'fun' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'hot'. Also, 'the motor' should be 'my motorbike' or 'their motorbikes' for clarity and correctness.

× About my future study plan, I would probably say it's about the master degree.

✓ About my future study plan, I would probably say it is about pursuing a master's degree.

The phrase 'it's about the master degree' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'pursuing a master's degree' clarifies the intention. Also, 'master degree' should be 'master's degree'.

× I would like to go study abroad and maybe about to continue to study PhD at abroad also.

✓ I would like to go study abroad and maybe continue to study for a PhD abroad as well.

The phrase 'maybe about to continue to study PhD at abroad' is incorrect. It should be 'maybe continue to study for a PhD abroad'. Also, 'at abroad' is incorrect; 'abroad' alone is sufficient.