Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较复杂但不够自然，且有些冗余。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和词汇搭配，使表达更流畅自然。

예시: I am a university student majoring in human geography and urban planning. After I graduate, I hope to study abroad to explore the world and gain international cultural experience.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且信息重复。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I usually study in the library because it is a quiet and public place. The peaceful atmosphere and hardworking people there motivate me to focus on my studies.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达重复，句子结构不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, the library is a good place to study because it offers a peaceful and quiet atmosphere. Also, seeing many people studying there motivates me to concentrate better.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，且句子冗长。建议简化句子，注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I think the library should make some changes. Sometimes, noisy children shout loudly, which disturbs the quiet atmosphere needed for studying.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，注意时态和词汇搭配，使表达更清晰流畅。

예시: I believe that after I graduate, I can study abroad. It is my dream to travel around the world, especially to Europe, to experience different cultures and better understand the world.

× my university major focus is on the human geography and urban planning.

✓ my university major focuses on human geography and urban planning.

主语是单数major，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式focuses；human geography前不需要定冠词the。

× I think I wish after I graduate, I want to study abroad because I want to see this wonderful world and have some cultural international experience.

✓ I think after I graduate, I want to study abroad because I want to see this wonderful world and have some international cultural experience.

wish和want不能连用，表达愿望时用want即可；international cultural experience的词序更自然。

× the library is on a very quiet and public space.

✓ the library is in a very quiet and public space.

表示位置时，地点用介词in而不是on。

× after you get into the library you can see the many people.

✓ after you get into the library you can see many people.

many前不需要定冠词the。

× They are hardworking and it will motivate you.

✓ They are hardworking and it motivates you.

描述习惯性事实时用一般现在时motivate。

× library offers a peaceful and the quiet atmosphere

✓ library offers a peaceful and quiet atmosphere

两个形容词修饰同一名词时，the只用一次且此处不需要the。

× it is a good place to study in the library

✓ it is a good place to study at the library

表示在某处学习，介词用at更合适。

× although it was a good learning space, but sometimes some naughty child, they were shouting, they were shout all around in the library and it will disturb the quiet atmosphere.

✓ although it is a good learning space, sometimes some naughty children shout all around in the library and it disturbs the quiet atmosphere.

although和but不能连用；child复数应为children；时态应与现在情况一致；动词形式应统一。

× I believe that when I graduated I can study abroad.

✓ I believe that when I graduate I can study abroad.

表达将来时间时，条件从句用一般现在时graduate，而非过去时graduated。

× I really want to go to the Europe until this different culture and have a better understanding of the world.

✓ I really want to go to Europe to experience this different culture and have a better understanding of the world.

Europe前不加定冠词the；until用法错误，应使用to express目的的to experience。