Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý tưởng không được truyền đạt một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: I am currently a junior student at the Academy of Finance. I chose this major because my mother is an auditor, and she has inspired me a lot to follow her career path.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về trường học để câu trả lời hấp dẫn hơn.

예시: I study at the Academy of Finance in Hanoi, which is a well-known university. It offers many career opportunities and helps students develop important skills.

제안: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, it is a good place to study because the university offers many opportunities and helps students develop important skills. For example, there are practical courses and internships that prepare students for the job market.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi về việc bạn muốn thay đổi gì ở trường hiện tại mà lại nói về việc chọn trường khác. Ngoài ra, có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng về những thay đổi bạn muốn và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác.

예시: If I could make changes, I would like my university to offer more diverse majors and better facilities to support students' learning.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý tưởng không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời đầy đủ, rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt kế hoạch học tập tương lai của mình.

예시: After I graduate, I plan to pursue a master's degree to develop my skills and increase my career opportunities. Additionally, I want to improve my knowledge in my field.

× I choose my major because I want to follow my mother first, my mother first day as she work auditors and she's bring me inspire a lot of.

✓ I chose my major because I want to follow my mother first; my mother works as an auditor and she inspires me a lot.

The sentence contains errors in verb tense and form. 'Choose' should be in past tense 'chose' to match the past action. 'She work auditors' is incorrect; it should be 'she works as an auditor' to use the correct third person singular form and preposition. 'She's bring me inspire a lot of' is incorrect; it should be 'she inspires me a lot' to use the correct verb form and structure.

× Well, I am studying at Academy of Finance which is a well known university in Hanoi because it brings a lot of opportunity, career and for my 4 students and develop skills for them.

✓ Well, I am studying at the Academy of Finance, which is a well-known university in Hanoi because it brings a lot of opportunities and careers for students and helps develop skills for them.

The sentence has issues with article usage ('the Academy of Finance'), adjective form ('well-known'), plural forms ('opportunities', 'careers'), and sentence structure. 'For my 4 students' is unclear and likely incorrect; it should be 'for students'. The sentence also needs conjunctions to connect ideas properly.

× Well, of course, because my university is offering my current opportunity and have students develop important skills for the future.

✓ Well, of course, because my university offers many opportunities and helps students develop important skills for the future.

'Is offering my current opportunity' is awkward and incorrect; 'offers many opportunities' is better. 'Have students develop' should be 'helps students develop' to correctly express assistance. Modal verb usage is not directly involved here, but verb forms and subject-verb agreement are corrected.

× For example, there are various practical course and internship that appears for the job market.

✓ For example, there are various practical courses and internships that appear in the job market.

'Course' and 'internship' should be plural to match 'various'. 'That appears' should be 'that appear' to agree with the plural subject. 'For the job market' is better expressed as 'in the job market'.

× Well, if I have an opportunity, I would choose AB&U which is a famous university in Vietnam. It have a lot of major and evil.

✓ Well, if I have an opportunity, I would choose AB&U, which is a famous university in Vietnam. It has a lot of majors and fields.

'It have' should be 'It has' for third person singular agreement. 'Major' should be plural 'majors'. 'Evil' is likely a mishearing or typo; 'fields' or 'areas' is appropriate here.

× Well, after I graduate, I want to learn a degree because I would like to develop my skills and save my opportunity. Besides, I want to enhance my.

✓ Well, after I graduate, I want to earn a degree because I would like to develop my skills and seize my opportunities. Besides, I want to enhance my knowledge.

'Learn a degree' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'earn a degree'. 'Save my opportunity' should be 'seize my opportunities' to express taking advantage of chances. The last sentence is incomplete; 'enhance my' needs an object such as 'knowledge'.