Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为直接且信息明确，但可以更自然地表达，例如用完整句子介绍自己，并稍作扩展。

예시: I am currently a third-year student at Zhejiang University of Technology, where I am majoring in Chinese language and literature. I really enjoy my studies because they help me understand my culture better.

제안: 回答不完整，句子中断，缺少连贯性。建议完整表达地点信息，并用连接词丰富细节。

예시: I study on the campus of Zhejiang University of Technology, which is located in Hangzhou, Zhejiang province, in the southern part of China. The campus is very beautiful, with colorful flowers and green spaces that create a pleasant environment.

제안: 回答内容丰富，但句子结构不完整，表达不够流畅。建议使用连接词使句子连贯，避免断句。

예시: Yes, it is a great place to study because the environment is beautiful with many colorful flowers and trees. Moreover, the atmosphere is friendly and supportive, so you can always find people who are willing to help you.

제안: 表达不够自然，句子结构有误，且用词不准确。建议用更自然的表达方式，并解释原因。

예시: No, I don't think I would like any changes. I prefer to have a quiet and stable place where I can study alone or with my friends because it helps me concentrate better.

제안: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺少连贯性和具体内容。建议明确表达未来计划，并使用连接词使句子流畅。

예시: To be honest, I don't have a detailed plan yet. My main goal is to complete my degree successfully, and after that, I will decide what to do next based on the opportunities available.

× I started in my school campus which is located in Hangzhou, Zhejiang province. It is in the southern part of China and my school is very beautiful with colorful flowers and.

✓ I study on my school campus which is located in Hangzhou, Zhejiang province. It is in the southern part of China and my school is very beautiful with colorful flowers.

句子结构错误。原句中“I started in my school campus”表达不清，应该用现在时态描述学习地点，改为“I study on my school campus”更符合语境。

× Also, the atmosphere in my school is very friendly and supportive, which means you can meet some people who. Always willing to help you.

✓ Also, the atmosphere in my school is very friendly and supportive, which means you can meet some people who are always willing to help you.

句子结构错误。原句中“who. Always willing to help you”断句错误，缺少谓语动词，改为“who are always willing to help you”使句子完整。

× No I don't think so. I want a stable place to study by myself or with my friends. I think hold a stable place is a good way to study.

✓ No, I don't think so. I want a stable place to study by myself or with my friends. I think having a stable place is a good way to study.

情态动词使用错误。原句“I think hold a stable place”中“hold”用法不当，应使用动名词形式“having”来表达“拥有一个稳定的地方”。

× To be honest, I don't have a very clearly detailed plan. I just want to get my degree smoothly and then depends on the situation I wear to seek for the.

✓ To be honest, I don't have a very clear detailed plan. I just want to get my degree smoothly and then depending on the situation, I will seek for the opportunities.

时态错误。原句“depends on the situation I wear to seek for the”结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，且“wear”用错。改为“depending on the situation, I will seek for the opportunities”符合语法和语境。