Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法不够准确，句子结构不完整，且表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子，避免语法错误，并且使表达更流畅自然。

예시: I am currently a student at Hobby Novel University, where I major in translation. I chose this major because I love learning about different languages and cultures.

제안: 时态使用不当，应该用现在时描述现在的学习地点。句子连接不够自然，建议使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I study at Normal University, which is located in Shizhadong, the capital of Hebei province.

제안: 表达较为清晰，但句子稍显冗长且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更自然。

예시: Yes, our campus environment is very beautiful, and our library is quite big and quiet, making it a good place for students to study and read books.

제안: 表达不够清晰，存在语法错误和重复词汇。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免重复，并具体说明改进措施。

예시: Yes, I would like to see some changes, especially improving the study environment. For example, our library is quite small, so I hope to add more comfortable seats in the relaxation areas for students.

제안: 表达中有重复和语法错误，句子结构不够清晰。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用正确的冠词和介词。

예시: In the future, I want to be an interpreter in the UK because I love its environment and culture. Therefore, I would like to live there and pursue my favorite career.

× While I am currently a student from Hobby Novel University where majored in translation.

✓ I am currently a student at Hobby Novel University where I major in translation.

原句中使用了不完整的从句结构，缺少主语和谓语，导致句子不完整。应将句子改为完整的陈述句，明确主语和谓语。

× I chose this major because I love knowing different languages and cultures.

✓ I chose this major because I love learning about different languages and cultures.

动词短语“love knowing”不自然，通常表达喜欢学习某事应使用“love learning about”。“knowing”用法不当。

× I studied in Normal University and this school is located in Shizhadong which is the capital of Hebei province.

✓ I study at Normal University, which is located in Shizhadong, the capital of Hebei province.

回答当前学习地点时应使用现在时态，且“which is the capital of Hebei province”应用逗号隔开，句子更通顺。

× Yes, our campus environment is very beautiful and our library is quite big and quiet where it's a good place for student to study and read books.

✓ Yes, our campus environment is very beautiful and our library is quite big and quiet, which is a good place for students to study and read books.

“student”应为复数形式“students”，因为指的是一般学生群体。

× Yes, I would like the place where I started to make some changes, particularly by improving the study environment.

✓ Yes, I would like the place where I study to make some changes, particularly by improving the study environment.

“the place where I started”语义不清，应为“the place where I study”，表达想对学习的地方进行改进。

× For example, our library is quite small, so I want to add some size seats in the in the relaxing areas for students.

✓ For example, our library is quite small, so I want to add some large seats in the relaxing areas for students.

“some size seats”表达不正确，应使用“some large seats”表示“几张大座位”。

× Well, in my future I want to be a interpreter in UK because I love UK's environment and the culture.

✓ Well, in my future I want to be an interpreter in the UK because I love the UK's environment and culture.

“a interpreter”应为“an interpreter”，冠词使用错误；“UK”前应加定冠词“the”；“the culture”前应加定冠词“the”。

× So I so I'd like to live in the UK and to choose my favorite job.

✓ So I'd like to live in the UK and choose my favorite job.

句中重复使用“So I so”是多余且错误的，应删除多余部分，使句子通顺。