Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较完整且自然，但句子较长且略显复杂，建议简化句子结构，避免冗长，同时注意冠词和复数形式的正确使用。

예시: I am currently a student. I graduated this year with a major in finance. Now, I am preparing to pursue a master's degree in Business Administration to deepen my knowledge and improve my career prospects.

제안: 回答内容具体，但存在语法错误，如时态不一致和拼写错误。建议注意时态统一，使用正确的形容词形式，并增加连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I study at the Capital University of Business and Economics, which is well known for its strong programs in finance and economics. I chose this university because it offers excellent courses and experienced professors, which help me gain practical knowledge in my major.

제안: 回答不完整，句子未结束且内容重复。建议完整表达观点，避免重复，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: Yes, it is a good place to study. It is well known for its strong programs in finance and economics. I chose it because it has experienced professors who provide excellent guidance.

제안: 回答内容具体，但句子未完成，缺少细节描述。建议完整表达所有观点，避免句子中断，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

예시: If I could change something about my university, I would improve the decoration to make it more welcoming. Also, the broken toilet doors are very inconvenient. Moreover, many desks are old and need to be repaired.

제안: 回答表达不够自然，存在语法错误和用词不当。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，简洁明了地说明计划。

예시: In the future, I plan to study finance in depth. I will go to the University of Edinburgh to pursue my master's degree and complete my further studies.

× I choose this university because it offers excellence courses and experience professors which can help me gain practical knowledge in my major.

✓ I chose this university because it offers excellent courses and experienced professors which can help me gain practical knowledge in my major.

这里存在单复数和形容词形式错误。'excellence courses' 应为 'excellent courses'，'experience professors' 应为 'experienced professors'。此外，时态应与上下文一致，过去时 'chose' 更合适。

× I choose this university because it offers excellence courses and experience professors which can help me gain practical knowledge in my major.

✓ I chose this university because it offers excellent courses and experienced professors which can help me gain practical knowledge in my major.

句子描述的是过去的选择行为，动词 'choose' 应使用过去式 'chose'。

× And also I choose this place to study because it offers experienced professors and.

✓ And also I chose this place to study because it offers experienced professors.

句子中 'choose' 应为过去式 'chose'，且句子末尾不应有多余的 'and'。

× And also I choose this place to study because it offers experienced professors and.

✓ And also I chose this place to study because it offers experienced professors.

描述过去的选择行为，动词应使用过去式 'chose'。

× Moreover, many desks are covered with.

✓ Moreover, many desks are covered with dust.

句子不完整，缺少被覆盖的具体内容，导致结构错误。

× In the future, I prepare to study in finance deeply and I will going to the University of Edinburgh to pursue my master degree and finish my further study.

✓ In the future, I plan to study finance deeply and I will go to the University of Edinburgh to pursue my master's degree and continue my further study.

'prepare' 应改为 'plan' 表达未来计划，'will going' 语法错误，应为 'will go'，'master degree' 应为 'master's degree'。