Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“do this interns”应为“do these internships”，建议注意语法准确性，同时回答可以更简洁自然，避免冗余。

예시: I'm currently a full-time university student and I also do internships at law firms. These internships help me cover my expenses and provide valuable practical experience.

제안: 回答中连接词使用不当，如“Although... but...”结构重复，建议使用正确的连接词以保证句子流畅自然。

예시: I study at a university located in Haidian District, Beijing. Although it is a relatively small campus, it is well equipped with facilities like a library and a gym, which make it a comfortable place to study.

제안: 回答内容丰富且结构清晰，但最后一句中“or take regular breaks”时态不一致，建议保持时态一致，提升表达准确性。

예시: Yes, it is a great place to study because the professors are knowledgeable and there are extensive resources available. However, some people find the academic atmosphere a bit too intense, which is understandable. But this pressure can be managed by joining study groups or taking regular breaks.

제안: 回答中“adding more ceilings”表达不准确，可能是想说“adding more ceilings lights”或“improving the ceiling”，建议用词准确且具体。

예시: Yes, I would like the place where I study to make some improvements. For example, adding more ceiling lights or better lighting would create a better learning environment. I believe continuous development is essential for any place to become more effective and welcoming.

제안: 回答内容具体且结构合理，建议在表达兴趣时可以使用更丰富的词汇，使表达更生动。

예시: I'm planning to focus on internships and gain practical experience before I graduate. After that, I might pursue further studies depending on my career goals and available opportunities. Currently, I'm deeply interested in human rights research because I want to make a meaningful contribution.

× Not only do this interns help me cover my expenses, but they also provide valuable practical experience.

✓ Not only do these interns help me cover my expenses, but they also provide valuable practical experience.

这里的“this interns”中，interns是复数，应该用复数指示代词“these”而不是单数“this”。

× Although it is relatively a small campus but it is well equipped with various facilities like a library and a gym which make it a comfortable place to study.

✓ Although it is a relatively small campus, it is well equipped with various facilities like a library and a gym which make it a comfortable place to study.

“Although”引导让步状语从句时，句中不应再使用“but”，且“relatively”应放在冠词“a”之后。

× But this pressure can be managed by joining study groups or take regular breaks.

✓ But this pressure can be managed by joining study groups or taking regular breaks.

“by”后面应接动名词形式，故“take”应改为“taking”。

× For example, adding more ceilings or better lighting would create a better learning environment.

✓ For example, adding more ceiling lights or better lighting would create a better learning environment.

“ceilings”指的是天花板，不能直接添加。应使用“ceiling lights”（天花板灯）来表达增加照明的意思。

× But this pressure can be managed by joining study groups or take regular breaks.

✓ But this pressure can be managed by joining study groups or taking regular breaks.

“by”后面应接动名词形式，故“take”应改为“taking”。