Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，直接回答身份，并用简单句说明专业和学习内容，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: I am a final year undergraduate student at the University of Macau. I major in Business Intelligence and Data Analysis, where I learn programming skills to solve business challenges.

제안: 回答不完整，句子结尾突然中断，且有重复词汇。建议完整表达学习地点，并避免重复，句子简洁明了。

예시: I usually study in the school library or a cafe, which are public spaces for students. Sometimes, I also study in my dormitory for a quieter environment.

제안: 表达不清晰且有多次重复，语法错误较多。建议用简洁的句子说明为什么这个地方适合学习，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: Yes, it is a good place to study because everyone around is focused on their work, which helps me concentrate better.

제안: 回答不完整且语法混乱，表达不清楚。建议明确表达希望图书馆增加独立学习小房间的愿望，并说明原因，句子简洁连贯。

예시: Yes, I would like the library to have more small rooms for independent study because it would provide a quieter environment.

제안: 表达不够流畅，有重复词汇，语法错误。建议简洁明了地说明未来计划，避免重复，使用正确的词汇搭配。

예시: I plan to apply for a master's degree to deepen my programming skills and business knowledge.

× And my final year undergraduate student in University of Macau majoring in business Intelligence and data analysis, which is a subject that teach us using programming skills to to make the business in challenges.

✓ I am a final year undergraduate student at the University of Macau majoring in Business Intelligence and Data Analysis, which is a subject that teaches us to use programming skills to solve business challenges.

句子缺少主语，且结构混乱。应补充主语“I am”，并调整句子结构使其完整通顺。动词teach应为第三人称单数形式teaches。

× I am a final year undergraduate student in University of Macau majoring in business Intelligence and data analysis

✓ I am a final year undergraduate student at the University of Macau majoring in Business Intelligence and Data Analysis

表示在某个学校学习，介词应使用at而非in。

× which is a subject that teach us using programming skills to to make the business in challenges.

✓ which is a subject that teaches us to use programming skills to solve business challenges.

主语是单数的subject，谓语动词teach应使用第三人称单数形式teaches。

× to to make the business in challenges.

✓ to solve business challenges.

business challenges应为复数形式，表示多个挑战。

× Well, usually I study in the school library or a cafe, which is a public space for for students to study.

✓ Well, usually I study at the school library or a cafe, which is a public space for students to study.

表示在某个具体地点学习，介词应使用at而非in。

× Sometimes I will also study in my dormitory to enjoy a.

✓ Sometimes I also study in my dormitory to enjoy some quiet time.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，导致表达不清。应补充完整内容。

× the people surround you are all focused on their working and study, which will prove you to prove you to fix your own, your own, your study.

✓ the people surrounding you are all focused on their work and study, which will help you focus on your own study.

people是复数，surround应改为现在分词surrounding作定语。work和study作为不可数名词，不用加ing形式。句子中重复且表达不清，需简化。

× which will prove you to prove you to fix your own, your own, your study.

✓ which will help you focus on your own study.

动词搭配错误，应使用help sb do sth结构，且fix在此处用法不当，应改为focus on。

× Yeah, I think I would like the the library to to make more small room to for us to study independently because because if people if people gets more the place.

✓ Yeah, I think I would like the library to have more small rooms for us to study independently because if people have more space, it will be better.

句子结构混乱，重复词语较多，缺少谓语。应调整句子结构，去除重复，补充完整表达。

× to to make more small room to for us to study independently

✓ to have more small rooms for us to study independently

room应使用复数rooms，表示多个房间。

× if people gets more the place.

✓ if people have more space.

people为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式have，而非gets。

× For me, I will try to apply a master degree to dive into a deeper study for my for my skill of programming or some business business knowledge.

✓ For me, I will try to apply for a master's degree to dive into deeper study to improve my programming skills and business knowledge.

apply后应接介词for，表示申请。master degree前应加所有格's，表示硕士学位。重复词business business应去除。skills应为复数。