Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有語法錯誤和用詞不當，建議你在回答時注意句子結構，並使用正確的詞彙來表達你的意思。例如，'I was lovely field' 應改為 'I love this field'。此外，回答應更簡潔且有條理。

예시: I'm currently a student at National Taipei University, majoring in Leisure and Sport Management. I love this field because I enjoy organizing sports events and staying active through various exercises.

제안: 你的回答不完整且缺乏連貫性，建議你在回答時完整表達地點資訊，並避免使用不明確的詞彙，如 'Sunshine'。可以使用連接詞使句子更流暢。

예시: I study at National Taipei University, which is located in New Taipei City. The campus is situated in a lively district with many facilities nearby.

제안: 你的回答語法不完整且缺乏細節，建議你使用完整句子並提供具體原因，使用連接詞使語句更流暢。

예시: I don't think it's a good place to study because the transportation system is not very convenient for students, which makes commuting difficult.

제안: 你的回答中有語法錯誤且句子不完整，建議你使用正確的時態和完整句子，並清楚表達理由。

예시: If I could change the location of my university, I would choose Taizhou because it is a beautiful place with convenient transportation options like buses, bicycles, and the MRT.

제안: 你的回答有語法錯誤且句子結構不清晰，建議你使用正確的冠詞和連接詞，並使句子更流暢。

예시: My future study plan is to become an exchange student in Europe because I want to broaden my horizons and travel extensively.

× I was lovely field because I love to manage jobs, leisure and sports event and I also like to exercise many different.

✓ I was in a lovely field because I love to manage jobs, leisure, and sports events, and I also like to exercise in many different ways.

The original sentence misuses 'lovely' as an adjective without a noun and lacks prepositions. 'Lovely' should describe a noun, so 'lovely field' needs a preposition 'in'. Also, 'sports event' should be plural 'sports events' to match the context. 'Exercise many different' is incomplete; it should be 'exercise in many different ways' to be grammatically correct.

× I was lovely field because I love to manage jobs, leisure and sports event and I also like to exercise many different.

✓ I was in a lovely field because I love to manage jobs, leisure, and sports events, and I also like to exercise in many different ways.

The sentence lacks the preposition 'in' before 'a lovely field' and 'in' before 'many different ways' to indicate location and manner respectively. Prepositions are necessary to clarify relationships between words.

× I was lovely field because I love to manage jobs, leisure and sports event and I also like to exercise many different.

✓ I was in a lovely field because I love to manage jobs, leisure, and sports events, and I also like to exercise in many different ways.

'Sports event' should be plural 'sports events' because it refers to multiple events. Using the correct plural form is important for subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× I study at National Taipei University at New Taipei City. Sunshine is a popular district. And.

✓ I study at National Taipei University in New Taipei City. Sunshine is a popular district.

The sentence fragment 'And.' is incomplete and should be removed. Also, the preposition 'at' should be 'in' when referring to a city. Sentence fragments should be avoided for clarity.

× Their transportation not very convenient for students.

✓ The transportation is not very convenient for students.

'Their' is a possessive pronoun referring to people, but here the subject is 'transportation', which is singular and requires the definite article 'The'. Also, the verb 'is' is missing for the sentence to be complete.

× If I can change my University Place, I want to change to Taizhou because it was very beautiful place and very convenient for student.

✓ If I could change my university, I would want to change to Taizhou because it is a very beautiful place and very convenient for students.

The conditional sentence requires 'could' instead of 'can' to express hypothetical situation. 'University Place' is unnatural; 'university' suffices. 'Was' should be 'is' to describe current state. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to match context.

× It can take bus or ride bicycle and take the MRT to.

✓ You can take the bus, ride a bicycle, and take the MRT there.

The sentence lacks articles 'the' before 'bus' and 'a' before 'bicycle'. Also, 'to' at the end is incomplete; 'there' clarifies the destination. Proper prepositions and articles are necessary for clarity.

× I want to be a exchange student and go to Europe are my future study plans and because I want to explore my horizons and travel everywhere.

✓ I want to be an exchange student and go to Europe; these are my future study plans because I want to explore my horizons and travel everywhere.

The article before 'exchange' should be 'an' due to vowel sound. The sentence structure is awkward; separating ideas with a semicolon improves clarity. 'Are' is incorrect; 'these are' properly connects the subject and predicate.