Study— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you work or are you a student?
수험생
I'm a student in the BMBU University located in the Guangdong province and my major is accounting.
시험관
Where do you study?
수험생
I study in the Guangdong province and it is southeastern city in China.
시험관
Is it a good place to study?
수험생
Yes, because Guangdong is a province with the best economic development system that there are many good corporations and industries there, so this company can provide the student the plenty of the opportunities to study.
시험관
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
수험생
Yes, I would like the place where I study to make some change. The first, the library should add some disgusting rooms for students to have the meeting about the group project.
시험관
What are your future study plans?
수험생
1st, I'm preparing for applying my masters degree and then I'd like to have the internship in the Hong Kong area because it will provide me the valuable practical experience.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答时应更自然简洁，避免冗余。可以直接说自己是学生，学校和专业信息可以简化表达。
예시: I'm a student at BMBU University in Guangdong, majoring in accounting.
Where do you study?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中地理描述不准确且表达不自然。广东是省份，不是城市，应纠正并简化表达。
예시: I study in Guangdong province, which is located in southeastern China.
Is it a good place to study?
점수: 55.0제안: 句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。应简洁明了地说明原因，并使用连词使句子连贯。
예시: Yes, Guangdong is economically developed with many companies, so students have plenty of opportunities for internships and learning.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
점수: 50.0제안: 用词错误（disgusting rooms），表达不准确。应使用正确词汇并简洁表达需求。
예시: Yes, I hope the library can add some meeting rooms for students to discuss group projects.
What are your future study plans?
점수: 70.0제안: 表达基本清楚，但语法和用词需改进。应使用更自然的表达方式和连词。
예시: First, I'm preparing to apply for a master's degree. Then, I plan to do an internship in Hong Kong to gain valuable practical experience.
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