Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了基本信息，但存在语法错误和用词不准确的问题，例如“or training manager”应为“a training manager”，“stuff”应为“staff”。建议注意语法结构，使用正确的词汇，并简洁明了地表达。

예시: I am currently a training manager at a hotel. My main responsibilities include organizing training sessions and delivering training to new staff. Additionally, I conduct grooming checks to ensure all staff meet the hotel's standards.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达不清的问题，如“promise school”应为“primary school”，句子结构混乱。建议使用正确的词汇，简洁表达学习经历，并避免重复信息。

예시: I studied in my hometown, Nanjing. I completed my primary school, middle school, and college there, majoring in hotel management. I enjoy my major and now work as a training manager in the hospitality industry.

제안: 回答中存在词汇错误，如“historical size”应为“historical sites”，“tour sides”应为“tourist sites”，句子不连贯。建议注意词汇准确性和句子连贯性。

예시: Yes, Nanjing is a wonderful city with many historical sites and interesting tourist attractions. It is also a very welcoming city for visitors.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“Siri”应为“No, there is”，“many people Z will choose to choose”重复且不准确。建议简洁明确表达观点，避免语法错误。

예시: No, I don't think anything needs to be changed in Nanjing. I hope that in the future, more people will choose Nanjing as a place to study or live.

제안: 回答中“easy to chew”表达不当，应为“easy to understand”或“basic”。建议使用准确表达，清晰说明学习计划和原因。

예시: Yes, I plan to study psychology because it is important for me as a training manager to improve my skills and better understand people.

× I'm working now.

✓ I work now.

这里描述的是现在的职业状态，应该使用一般现在时而不是现在进行时。现在进行时通常表示正在进行的动作，而职业状态是一个常态。

× I am currently or training manager in a hotel.

✓ I am currently a training manager in a hotel.

这里缺少冠词'a'，并且'or'是错误的词，应改为'a'表示职业身份。

× My routine work is to organize training session in the hotel and to deliver trainings to new stuff and sometimes I will do a grooming check to ensure all the stuff the.

✓ My routine work is to organize training sessions in the hotel and to deliver training to new staff, and sometimes I will do a grooming check to ensure all the staff are well presented.

training session应为复数training sessions；trainings用法不当，training作为不可数名词；stuff应为staff，表示员工；句子末尾不完整，补充完整表达。

× I used to study in my hometown which is Nanjing.

✓ I studied in my hometown, which is Nanjing.

used to表示过去习惯，语境中应直接用过去式studied更合适。

× I did my promise school, middle school and College in Nanjing.

✓ I did my primary school, middle school and college in Nanjing.

promise school应为primary school；college首字母不应大写。

× My major is hotel management in I like my major.

✓ My major is hotel management and I like my major.

句子中in用法错误，应使用连词and连接两个独立句子。

× Also, I am a training manager now in the hospitality industry.

✓ Also, I am a training manager now in the hospitality industry.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× Yes, Nanjing is a wonderful city. We have so many historical size and interesting tour sides.

✓ Yes, Nanjing is a wonderful city. We have so many historical sites and interesting tourist sites.

size应为sites；tour sides应为tourist sites。

× Also Nanjing is a very. Welcomed CT too many visitors.

✓ Also, Nanjing is a very welcoming city to many visitors.

welcomed应为welcoming，形容词形式；CT应为city；句子断开错误，需合并。

× No, Siri is nothing needs to be changed in Nanjing.

✓ No, there is nothing that needs to be changed in Nanjing.

Siri应为there；句子缺少that引导的定语从句。

× I just hope. That in the future many people Z will choose to choose Nanjing as a place that the 1-2 studying or move in.

✓ I just hope that in the future many people will choose Nanjing as a place to study or move to.

句子断开错误，去掉多余的choose；1-2 studying应为to study；move in应为move to。

× Yes, I am planning to learn something really easy to chew, psychology, because I am a training manager in a hotel and it is very important for me to always improve my skills in my field.

✓ Yes, I am planning to learn something really easy to do, psychology, because I am a training manager in a hotel and it is very important for me to always improve my skills in my field.

easy to chew用法错误，应为easy to do，表示容易学习。