Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более ясным и структурированным. Избегайте повторений и нечетких выражений. Используйте простые и понятные предложения, чтобы ясно выразить свою мысль.

예시: I am currently a student. I am focusing on studying and memorizing the subjects I need to learn.

제안: Ответ должен быть более конкретным и связным. Избегайте пауз и неуверенности. Укажите название или тип школы и текущий статус обучения.

예시: I study at a local high school. Currently, I am on holiday from school.

제안: Ответ должен быть более связным и полным. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и избегайте повторений.

예시: Yes, it is a good place to study because it is very close to my home, so I can easily commute. Also, the environment is quiet and comfortable.

제안: Ответ должен быть более четким и грамматически правильным. Избегайте повторений и используйте более точные выражения.

예시: No, I would not like any changes because my school offers many opportunities and has convenient and comfortable facilities.

제안: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и завершенным. Четко сформулируйте свои планы и используйте связующие слова.

예시: In the future, I have many plans, but the most important is to enter a university in the Big East region to continue my studies.

× I miss students, not worker and I.

✓ I am a student, not a worker.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'miss students' and 'worker and I', which is grammatically incorrect. The correct singular form 'a student' should be used to match the subject. Also, 'worker and I' is unclear and incorrect in this context. The corrected sentence clearly states the student's status.

× I trying to.

✓ I am trying to.

The verb 'trying' requires an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. The original sentence lacks the auxiliary verb, making it grammatically incorrect.

× I training too, I turning to memorize some, uh, some subjects that I have to learn it, learn them.

✓ I am training too, I am trying to memorize some subjects that I have to learn.

The verbs 'training' and 'turning' need auxiliary verbs 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'turning to memorize' is incorrect; 'trying to memorize' is appropriate. The phrase 'learn it, learn them' is redundant and incorrect; 'learn' suffices.

× I study at, at school, UM, at school that uh.

✓ I study at school.

The repetition of 'at' and the phrase 'at school that uh' is awkward and incorrect. Simplifying to 'I study at school' is grammatically correct and clear.

× The tense, tense grades and things great.

✓ The grades and things are great.

The phrase 'tense, tense grades' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or error. 'Grades' is plural and should be matched with plural verb 'are'. The corrected sentence is clear and grammatically correct.

× But nowadays, nowadays I have a, I have a holiday from the school, uh.

✓ But nowadays, I have a holiday from school.

The repetition of 'nowadays' is unnecessary. The article 'the' before 'school' is not needed when speaking generally. The corrected sentence is concise and grammatically correct.

× Also there have. Aye.

✓ Also, there is.

The phrase 'there have' is incorrect; 'there is' should be used for singular or uncountable nouns. The word 'Aye' is unclear and likely a filler or error.

× my school is a has a lot of has a lot of opportunities and.

✓ My school has a lot of opportunities.

The original sentence has redundant phrases and incorrect article usage. 'My school has a lot of opportunities' is correct and clear.

× And make a make very a convenient and comforted amenities that uh.

✓ And it provides very convenient and comfortable amenities.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and word forms ('comforted' should be 'comfortable'). The corrected sentence uses proper adjective forms and clear structure.

× Up in the future, I have a lot of I have a lot of plans that I need achieved then, but the most important thing that I.

✓ In the future, I have a lot of plans that I need to achieve, but the most important thing is that I...

The phrase 'need achieved' is incorrect; it should be 'need to achieve'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected for grammar and clarity.

× I entered into the university in those Big East and.

✓ I want to enter the university in those big cities.

The original sentence uses past tense 'entered' incorrectly for future plans. Also, 'Big East' is unclear; assuming 'big cities' is intended. The corrected sentence uses present tense to express future intention.