Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 많으며, 문장이 명확하지 않습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하고, 불필요한 반복을 피하며, 문법적 정확성을 높여야 합니다.

예시: I am a housewife, and my main responsibility is taking care of my children. My husband works in a different city, so we have a long-distance relationship and he visits only on weekends.

제안: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 문장이 끊어져 있어 이해하기 어렵습니다. 문장을 완성하고, 명확한 이유와 구체적인 내용을 포함하여 답변을 구성해야 합니다.

예시: I usually study English at home because it is quiet and comfortable. I study to improve my previous test score. Morning and before noon are ideal times for me since my children are at school then.

제안: 답변이 중복되고 문장이 완성되지 않아 명확하지 않습니다. 간결하고 논리적으로 연결된 문장으로 구체적인 이유를 포함해 답변을 개선해야 합니다.

예시: Yes, studying at home is convenient and provides a quiet, comfortable environment. Morning and before noon are ideal times because my children are at school then.

제안: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 문장이 끊어져 있어 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 명확한 이유와 구체적인 내용을 포함하여 완성된 문장으로 답변해야 합니다.

예시: No, I don't want to change my study place because studying at home is convenient and comfortable. Also, I only have time to study in the morning and before noon.

제안: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 문장이 완성되지 않아 이해하기 어렵습니다. 구체적인 계획과 이유를 명확하게 표현하고, 문장을 완성해야 합니다.

예시: My future study plan is to practice IELTS more. I want to buy new preparation books because I have finished the previous ones. Additionally, I plan to use some study applications to improve my skills.

× My husband. Is works at a different city so he so we are in long distance relationships now.

✓ My husband works in a different city, so we are in a long-distance relationship now.

The verb 'works' should be used without 'is' for third person singular present tense. Also, 'in a different city' is the correct preposition, and 'long-distance relationship' is singular and hyphenated.

× She all he only visit. On weekends.

✓ He only visits on weekends.

The pronouns 'She all he' are incorrect and confusing. The correct subject is 'He' referring to the husband, and the verb should be 'visits' for third person singular.

× I usually study English at home because it is quiet and comfortable. Environment.

✓ I usually study English at home because it is quiet and comfortable.

The word 'Environment' is a fragment and should be connected to the previous sentence or removed to avoid sentence fragment.

× I study English to improve my old score.

✓ I study English to improve my previous score.

'Old score' is not idiomatic; 'previous score' is the correct expression.

× I think in. In the morning and before noon time is ideal time for me because. My children are at home and.

✓ I think the morning and before noon are ideal times for me because my children are at home.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete; they need to be combined and completed for clarity.

× Yes, I think studying at home is very convenient for me and it provides me quiet and comfortable environment.

✓ Yes, I think studying at home is very convenient for me and it provides me with a quiet and comfortable environment.

The verb 'provides' requires the preposition 'with' when indicating what is provided.

× Especially in the morning and before noon time. It is ideal time for me. Since my children are at since my chill.

✓ Especially in the morning and before noon, it is an ideal time for me since my children are at home.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain incomplete phrases; they need to be combined and completed for clarity.

× No, I don't like to change my study place because. Studying at home is ideal for me because it provides me. Come convenient and comfortable environment.

✓ No, I don't want to change my study place because studying at home is ideal for me as it provides a convenient and comfortable environment.

The phrase 'Come convenient' is incorrect; it should be 'a convenient'. Also, sentence fragments should be combined properly.

× An I don't have enough time. To study. Because only morning in the morning and before.

✓ I don't have enough time to study except in the morning and before noon.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete; they need to be combined and completed for clarity.

× My future study plans is practicing IELTS study more.

✓ My future study plans are to practice IELTS more.

'Plans' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. Also, the phrase is restructured for clarity.

× I want to buy a new audience preparation books because I already finished the previous one an more additionally, I want to find.

✓ I want to buy new IELTS preparation books because I have already finished the previous ones. Additionally, I want to find...

The sentence is fragmented and contains errors; 'audience' should be 'IELTS', 'books' is plural so 'one' should be 'ones', and the sentence needs to be completed or connected properly.