Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many incomplete sentences, which affects the natural flow and clarity. Try to give a direct and clear response with a simple structure, avoiding redundancy and irrelevant details.

예시: I am a high school student at the High School for Gifted Students. I am currently in grade 12 and I really enjoy studying there.

제안: Your answer is short and somewhat unclear. Try to respond directly with a complete sentence and add a little detail to enrich your answer.

예시: I study at the High School for Gifted Students, and I am currently in grade 12.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Try to express your opinion clearly with supporting reasons, using linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Some people think it is a good place to study, but I don't like it because I find it hard to connect with my friends there.

제안: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand. Try to clearly state what changes you would like and explain why, using complete sentences and relevant vocabulary.

예시: I would like the school to provide more support for students to improve themselves and make learning easier. Currently, I feel some changes are needed to help students better.

제안: Your answer is understandable but fragmented. Try to give a clear and complete response with supporting details, using linking words to make it coherent.

예시: In the future, I want to go to university to study medicine because I want to become a doctor. Therefore, I plan to study hard every day to achieve this goal.

× I'm a student in the high school.

✓ I'm a student at the high school.

The correct preposition to indicate attendance at an institution is 'at' rather than 'in'. 'At the high school' is the standard expression for being enrolled there.

× I mean, great. Tiles at the high school for gifted and I'm really loud too.

✓ I mean, great. I study at the high school for the gifted and I'm really loud too.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Tiles' seems to be a mishearing or typo. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× I really love my school so I'm.

✓ I really love my school.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Removing the incomplete part makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× I refill atmos student, then a walk.

✓ I am a full-time student, then I walk.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'Refill atmos' is likely a mishearing or typo. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence.

× I'm sorry at the high school for the gifted at I'm in grade 12.

✓ I'm studying at the high school for the gifted and I'm in grade 12.

The phrase 'I'm sorry at' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I'm studying at' to indicate the place of study. Also, the sentence is restructured for clarity.

× If for some people this is a good play, but.

✓ For some people, this is a good place, but...

The preposition 'If' is incorrect here; it should be 'For'. Also, 'play' is a typo and should be 'place'. The sentence is corrected for proper preposition and word choice.

× In my opinion, I don't like my school so. I'm not really like it because.

✓ In my opinion, I don't like my school. I'm not really fond of it because...

The original sentences are fragmented and awkward. The correction provides complete sentences with proper structure and word choice.

× I can connect with. My friends.

✓ I can't connect with my friends.

The original sentence is fragmented and likely missing a negation. The correction assumes the intended meaning is negative and combines the fragments into a complete sentence.

× 'Cause I like the blaze. Help me improve myself an. Help me easy to Carson Tate an. Some people mind Charlie.

✓ Because I like the place. It helps me improve myself and makes it easy to concentrate. Some people might disagree.

The original sentences contain many errors and unclear phrases. The correction interprets the intended meaning and restructures the sentences for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× In my future I want to go to the university.

✓ In the future, I want to go to university.

The phrase 'go to the university' is less common when speaking generally about attending university. 'Go to university' is the standard expression. Also, 'In my future' is better expressed as 'In the future'.

× And I want to learn. Doctor, so I need to have a plane to do this.

✓ And I want to study to become a doctor, so I need to have a plan to do this.

'Learn doctor' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'study to become a doctor'. 'Plane' is a typo for 'plan'. The sentence is corrected for word choice and clarity.

× So I did too. Learn. Every day.

✓ So I try to learn every day.

The phrase 'did too' is incorrect in this context. The intended meaning is likely 'I try to learn every day'. The correction provides a grammatically correct and meaningful sentence.