Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时句子较为零散，缺乏连贯性，且部分信息重复。建议使用更自然流畅的表达，避免句子过短，增强句子之间的连接。

예시: I am currently a student at Shanghai Ocean University, which is located in the eastern part of China. Although the university is named after Shanghai, it is actually quite far from the city center.

제안: 回答中重复了之前的信息，且句子结构不完整。建议直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子补充具体细节。

예시: I study in Shanghai, which is a highly developed city in eastern China, famous for its advanced infrastructure and technology.

제안: 回答表达有些断断续续，且用词重复。建议使用更连贯的句子，避免重复词汇，并提供具体理由支持观点。

예시: Definitely, Shanghai is one of the best places to study in China because it offers abundant educational and technological resources, which help students receive high-quality education.

제안: 回答不够清晰，句子断裂，信息表达不完整。建议用完整句子表达观点，并具体说明希望改进的方面。

예시: Yes, I would like the university to be closer to the city center because currently, it takes me about five hours to get there, which is quite inconvenient.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不完整。建议使用完整句子表达计划，并具体说明学习目标。

예시: My future study plan is to go abroad to Australia if I can achieve high grades in all my tests. Additionally, I want to improve my ability to write professional essays.

× As you can hear in my school's name.

✓ As you can hear from my school's name.

句子结构不完整，缺少介词短语，正确表达应为“hear from my school's name”，表示“从我学校的名字中听出”。

× Well, in the last question, I have. Told you that I study in Shanghai.

✓ Well, in the last question, I have told you that I study in Shanghai.

句子被错误地拆分成两部分，导致结构不完整，应合并为一句完整句子。

× Which is located in the east of China.

✓ Shanghai, which is located in the east of China.

该句为非限制性定语从句，需与先行词连用，单独成句结构不完整，应与前句合并。

× Because this city has a variety of. Educational and technological, technological resources.

✓ Because this city has a variety of educational and technological resources.

句子被错误拆分，且“technological”重复，应合并并去除重复词，保证句子连贯完整。

× Therefore, the students in Shanghai can accept the best. Education.

✓ Therefore, the students in Shanghai can receive the best education.

“accept the best education”表达不自然，正确用法是“receive the best education”，且句子不应被拆分。

× Yes, the place where I study is far from the city center when I need to go to the city center.

✓ Yes, the place where I study is far from the city center. When I need to go to the city center,

句子过长且结构混乱，应拆分为两句，第一句陈述事实，第二句引出后续内容。

× I. Approximately should spend about five hours.

✓ I should spend approximately about five hours.

句子被错误拆分，且副词位置不当，应合并并调整副词顺序，使句子通顺。

× Moreover, I think in the future, I need to. Training my ability to write professional essay.

✓ Moreover, I think in the future, I need to train my ability to write professional essays.

“need to”后应接动词原形，不能接动名词“training”，且“essay”应为复数形式。