Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để người nghe dễ hiểu hơn.

예시: I am currently a student studying at a high school. I am working hard to get a scholarship and improve my skills.

제안: Bạn đã trả lời câu hỏi nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm câu trả lời thiếu tự nhiên và khó hiểu. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng hơn.

예시: I study at a high school located in the city center, which is very convenient for me. The campus has excellent facilities, including modern classrooms and a well-equipped library.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và từ vựng. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và từ vựng chính xác để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I believe it is a good place to study because the environment is quiet and free from distractions, which helps me concentrate better. Additionally, the library and study rooms are well equipped and provide all the resources I need.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu và từ vựng chưa chính xác, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I would like the place where I study to make some changes, particularly by improving the study environment. For example, adding more quiet zones and comfortable seating areas would help students concentrate better.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nội dung tốt nhưng nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên luyện tập cách sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và cấu trúc câu đơn giản để truyền đạt ý tưởng hiệu quả hơn.

예시: I am particularly interested in studying sustainable development and how we can better protect natural resources. After completing my studies, I want to deepen my knowledge and gain practical skills that will help me contribute to protecting the environment.

× I'm currently or student I'm studying at when we have skin for the gift.

✓ I'm currently a student studying at a school.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear, lacking proper sentence structure. It should be a complete sentence with a subject and verb to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× For crystal studying hard to get scholarship and leave one thousands mini full days here.

✓ I am studying hard to get a scholarship and stay here for thousands of days.

The sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases. It needs to be restructured to form a complete and coherent sentence.

× I study at early high school in the city center which is very convenient for me.

✓ I study at Early High School in the city center, which is very convenient for me.

Proper nouns like 'Early High School' should be capitalized. Also, a comma is needed before 'which' to separate the relative clause.

× The campers had excellent facility including Morgan classroom and a Welsh Rock library which gladly support modeling.

✓ The campus has excellent facilities including modern classrooms and a well-stocked library which gladly supports studying.

'Campers' should be 'campus'. 'Facility' should be plural 'facilities' to match the context. 'Morgan classroom' and 'Welsh Rock library' seem incorrect; likely intended 'modern classrooms' and 'well-stocked library'. Also, subject-verb agreement corrected to 'supports'.

× I believe it is a good place to study because the environment is quiet and free from distraction which helped me concentrate better.

✓ I believe it is a good place to study because the environment is quiet and free from distractions, which helps me concentrate better.

'Distraction' should be plural 'distractions' to match the context. Also, 'helped' should be 'helps' to maintain present tense consistency.

× Additionally, the facilities suggest the library and studied rooms are well equipped provide all the resort I need.

✓ Additionally, the facilities such as the library and study rooms are well equipped to provide all the resources I need.

The sentence is missing words and has incorrect word forms. 'Suggest' should be 'such as', 'studied rooms' should be 'study rooms', and 'resort' should be 'resources'.

× I would like to place where our study to make some changes.

✓ I would like the place where I study to make some changes.

The sentence is missing words and has incorrect pronouns. 'Our' should be 'I' to match the subject, and the sentence needs proper structure.

× Particularly by improving their study environment, for example adding more quiet zone and for both sitting areas would have children concentrate better.

✓ Particularly by improving the study environment, for example, adding more quiet zones and better seating areas to help students concentrate better.

'Their' should be 'the' to refer to the environment. 'Quiet zone' should be plural 'quiet zones'. 'For both sitting areas' is unclear and corrected to 'better seating areas'. 'Would have children concentrate better' is rephrased for clarity.

× I am particularly interested in studying sustainable develop development and how we can better protect natural resources.

✓ I am particularly interested in studying sustainable development and how we can better protect natural resources.

'Develop development' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'development'.

× After completing my a great story, I want to deep in my knowledge and gain practical skill that will help me contributors tolling environment is ill.

✓ After completing my studies, I want to deepen my knowledge and gain practical skills that will help me contribute to solving environmental issues.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains many errors. 'My a great story' is incorrect; likely meant 'my studies'. 'Deep in my knowledge' should be 'deepen my knowledge'. 'Contributors tolling environment is ill' is unclear and corrected to 'contribute to solving environmental issues'.