Study— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you work or are you a student?
수험생
I already worked for about 10 years. I was graduate at 2015.
시험관
Where do you study?
수험생
I was studying in Singapore before I my school called Nail Academy of Fine Arts. It's a art school in Singapore and my major is theater.
시험관
Is it a good place to study?
수험생
Yes, I think so because I really like that country since I was a child. So when I finished my high school, I asked my parents if I can go to Singapore for my. University. And I got the answer.
시험관
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
수험생
Well, not ready, I think my. School is already good enough, which is. Make a lot of. Art Person. In Singapore.
시험관
What are your future study plans?
수험생
Well, for now I don't have any plan of study because 'cause I already graduate for 10 years for now bye. I have men drop and I have to. Our money so I don't have time to study.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答时时态使用不准确，且句子结构不完整，建议使用正确的时态和完整句子表达。
예시: I have been working for about 10 years since I graduated in 2015.
Where do you study?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议简洁明了地介绍学校和专业。
예시: I studied at the Nanyang Academy of Fine Arts in Singapore, where I majored in theater.
Is it a good place to study?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答内容较丰富，但句子连接不够流畅，建议使用连接词使表达更连贯。
예시: Yes, I think it is a good place to study because I have liked Singapore since I was a child. Therefore, after finishing high school, I asked my parents if I could study there, and they agreed.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
점수: 40.0제안: 回答不完整且表达混乱，建议用完整句子清晰表达观点。
예시: No, I don't think any changes are necessary because my school already produces many talented artists in Singapore.
What are your future study plans?
점수: 45.0제안: 回答中有语法和表达错误，内容不连贯，建议用简洁明了的句子表达未来学习计划。
예시: At the moment, I don't have any plans to study further because I graduated 10 years ago and need to focus on work to support myself financially.
문법
× I already worked for about 10 years.
✓ I have already worked for about 10 years.
这里需要使用现在完成时表示从过去持续到现在的动作，不能用一般过去时。
× I was graduate at 2015.
✓ I graduated in 2015.
graduate是动词，过去式是graduated，且时间点用介词in而非at。
× I was studying in Singapore before I my school called Nail Academy of Fine Arts.
✓ I was studying in Singapore before I went to my school called Nail Academy of Fine Arts.
缺少动词went，且时态应为过去时。
× It's a art school in Singapore and my major is theater.
✓ It's an art school in Singapore and my major is theater.
art以元音音素开头，前面应使用不定冠词an。
× So when I finished my high school, I asked my parents if I can go to Singapore for my. University.
✓ So when I finished my high school, I asked my parents if I could go to Singapore for my university.
表示过去的请求，情态动词应使用could而非can。
× And I got the answer.
✓ And I got their answer.
缺少宾语，需明确回答的对象。
× Well, not ready, I think my. School is already good enough, which is. Make a lot of. Art Person. In Singapore.
✓ Well, not really, I think my school is already good enough, which has produced a lot of artists in Singapore.
句子结构混乱，代词使用不当，且art person应为artists。
× Well, for now I don't have any plan of study because 'cause I already graduate for 10 years for now bye.
✓ Well, for now I don't have any plan to study because I graduated 10 years ago.
时态错误，表示过去完成的动作应使用过去式graduated，且表达时间点用ago。
× I have men drop and I have to. Our money so I don't have time to study.
✓ I have to work and earn money, so I don't have time to study.
句子不完整且词语错误，men drop无意义，应表达工作赚钱的意思。
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