Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意冠词和动词形式的正确使用，同时避免重复和无意义的词汇。可以简洁明了地表达自己是学生，所学专业和选择学校的原因。

예시: I am a student studying accounting at the University of Finance and Economics. I chose this university because it has a strong business program and excellent faculty.

제안: 回答中有很多发音和用词错误，导致表达不清晰。建议使用简单准确的词汇描述学校位置和城市特点，避免无关或错误的词汇。

예시: I study at the University of Finance and Economics, which is located in Dalian. Dalian is a coastal city with a warm climate and beautiful scenery, providing a comfortable and peaceful environment for studying.

제안: 回答中存在词汇错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议使用准确的词汇描述学习资源和环境，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, it is a great place to study because the school offers many educational resources. For example, the libraries are large and quiet, which helps me concentrate. Additionally, the classrooms are comfortable, making it easier to focus on my studies.

제안: 回答内容不清晰且无意义，建议直接表达是否希望学校做出改变，并给出具体理由。

예시: No, I wouldn't like the place where I study to make any changes because the environment is perfect for my learning.

제안: 回答中有较多语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明未来的学习计划和原因，使用正确的词汇和句式。

예시: I plan to complete my undergraduate studies in accounting and then pursue a master's degree. I am passionate about learning and want to improve my skills and career prospects by studying more specialized topics.

× I'm student I'm studying accounting and don't pay University of Finance and economics.

✓ I'm a student. I'm studying accounting and I attend the University of Finance and Economics.

这里缺少冠词'a'，'student'是单数名词，前面需要加不定冠词。'don't pay University'表达错误，应为'I attend the University'表示就读。

× I choose this university for its drum population, population of business programs.

✓ I chose this university for its large population and variety of business programs.

'drum population'应为'large population'或类似表达，且'refer to plural'时应注意名词复数形式。

× An excellent faculty.

✓ It has an excellent faculty.

句子缺少主语和谓语，'faculty'是集合名词，需完整表达。

× I study as dumb University of Domain University of Finance and Economics which is located in Dalyan.

✓ I study at the University of Finance and Economics, which is located in Dalian.

'as dumb University of Domain'表达错误，应为'at the University'，且地名拼写应正确。

× Darling is a burning city with warm climate and Queens making it so worried from comfortable environment for starting and really enjoy the peaceful atmosphere here because it helps me focus on my studies.

✓ Dalian is a bustling city with a warm climate and green spaces, making it a comfortable environment for studying. I really enjoy the peaceful atmosphere here because it helps me focus on my studies.

原句中介词使用错误，且部分词汇拼写错误，需用正确的介词和词汇表达。

× Yes, it is a great place to study because the school provides money educational resources.

✓ Yes, it is a great place to study because the school provides many educational resources.

'money'应为'many'，表示大量的可数名词资源。

× For example, the libraries are very big queries and peaceful, which helps me concentrate on my studies.

✓ For example, the libraries are very big, quiet, and peaceful, which helps me concentrate on my studies.

'queries'用词错误，应为'quiet'表示安静。

× Additionally, the increment is comfortable making is easier to focus on digital products.

✓ Additionally, the environment is comfortable, making it easier to focus on my studies.

'increment'用词错误，应为'environment'，且介词和句子结构需调整。

× Definitely knows training is a nightmare for me because the environment is definitely perfect and it's using the arrow everything.

✓ Definitely, commuting is a nightmare for me because the environment is perfect and everything is convenient.

'knows training'表达错误，应为'commuting'，且代词和句子结构需调整。

× Alina how Anya IDR about changing them?

✓ I don't know about changing them.

句子无意义，推测为'I don't know about changing them'，需用正确代词和表达。

× I want to calculate my undergraduate studies in my mate major engine, pursue further education because I am very passionate about the learning and gaining new education.

✓ I want to complete my undergraduate studies in my major and pursue further education because I am very passionate about learning and gaining new knowledge.

'calculate'用词错误，应为'complete'；'mate major engine'表达错误，应为'major'；'the learning'前不需冠词。

× For example, I am interested in exploring other ones topics in my fails to improve my skills and career perspectives perspective.

✓ For example, I am interested in exploring other topics in my field to improve my skills and career prospects.

'ones topics'应为'other topics'；'fails'应为'field'；'career perspectives perspective'重复，应为'career prospects'。

× I believe continue my studies.

✓ I believe I will continue my studies.

句子缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整表达。