Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, phát âm không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời không nên quá dài hoặc lặp lại ý.

예시: I am currently a final year student at a high school in Benha City, Vietnam. I am also planning to find a part-time job to earn money to buy apps or things I like.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời có tính logic. Ngoài ra, nên tránh nói những câu không rõ nghĩa hoặc không liên quan đến câu hỏi.

예시: I study at one of the top high schools in my country. I like the school because it is well organized, but sometimes I find some teachers strict, which makes school life a bit challenging.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, it is a good place to study because the school has many quiet facilities and supportive teachers. I can easily ask for help whenever I need it.

제안: Bạn nên diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời có tính logic và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ vựng không phù hợp.

예시: Yes, I would like the school environment to be more stable because I find it hard to adapt to new changes quickly.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy trình bày kế hoạch học tập tương lai một cách cụ thể hơn.

예시: I don't have a clear plan yet, but I hope to study a field related to technology where I can earn a good income in the future.

× Now I'm a student in going high Schoon are in Benha City, Vietnam, Yeah.

✓ Now I'm a student attending high school in Benha City, Vietnam.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'in going high Schoon are' which is grammatically incorrect. The correct present continuous form is 'attending high school'. Also, 'Schoon' is a misspelling of 'school'. The sentence should clearly express the current ongoing action of studying at high school.

× I'm a final final year student in the school.

✓ I'm a final year student in the school.

The phrase 'final final year' is redundant. Only one 'final' is needed to describe the last year. This is a singular and plural issue related to unnecessary repetition.

× I'm however I think I will find a part time child to a money to buy quote app or anything I like.

✓ However, I think I will find a part-time job to earn money to buy apps or anything I like.

The original sentence misuses 'child' instead of 'job' and 'a money' which is incorrect. The modal verb 'will' is correctly used to express future intention, but the sentence structure and word choice are incorrect. 'Part-time job' is the correct phrase, and 'earn money' is the proper collocation.

× Oh, I'm study in the top high school in my country in my country.

✓ Oh, I study at the top high school in my country.

The phrase 'I'm study' is incorrect; it should be 'I study' for present simple tense. Also, 'in the top high school' should be 'at the top high school' as 'at' is the correct preposition for schools.

× Yeah, I should this cool because it's really it's really neat how however.

✓ Yeah, I like this school because it's really neat; however,

The original sentence uses 'should' incorrectly and has a confusing structure. 'Should' is replaced with 'like' to express preference. The conjunction 'however' is better placed after a semicolon or period to contrast ideas properly.

× However, I don't like something in my school. Come like my life some teacher Astrik and yeah.

✓ However, I don't like some things in my school, like some teachers and strict rules.

The original sentence has unclear pronouns and words ('Come like my life some teacher Astrik'). It is corrected to clearly express dislike towards certain teachers and strictness. 'Astrik' is likely a misspelling of 'strict'.

× Oh, I'm absolutely yes. Oh, in my school are there is. Betty many silent facility and its parent teacher so I can get my knowledge. An ask. And so when I need.

✓ Oh, absolutely yes. In my school, there are many facilities and parent-teacher meetings so I can gain knowledge and ask questions when I need to.

The original sentence misuses 'are there is' and has unclear phrases like 'Betty many silent facility'. The correct structure is 'there are many facilities'. Also, 'parent teacher' should be 'parent-teacher meetings' for clarity.

× Of course now I'd like the stable in my school year. Good option for me. I scared to turn the environment because I know I'm not really good at adapt to new environment.

✓ Of course, now I'd like stability in my school year. It's a good option for me. I'm scared to change the environment because I know I'm not really good at adapting to new environments.

The original sentence misuses 'stable' as a noun instead of 'stability'. 'I scared to turn the environment' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm scared to change the environment'. Also, 'adapt' should be in the gerund form 'adapting' after 'good at'.

× Yes, now I don't have any friend but however I find I agree to a plan where I can earn manage many money money like a daughter our technology my age.

✓ Yes, now I don't have any friends, but I have a plan where I can earn and manage a lot of money, like working in technology at my age.

The original sentence has singular/plural errors ('friend' should be 'friends'), awkward phrasing ('find I agree to a plan'), and unclear words ('daughter our technology'). The corrected sentence uses proper plural forms and clearer expressions of plans and fields of work.