Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại hoặc nói lan man.

예시: I am currently a high school student at Leonhard High School. In the future, I plan to pursue higher education at a university to improve my career opportunities.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, làm cho câu trả lời không tự nhiên và khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu có cấu trúc rõ ràng.

예시: I study at Leonhard High School, which is quite far from my home. I usually ride my motorbike, and it takes about 20 minutes to get there.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và cung cấp thông tin cụ thể hơn về lý do tại sao trường là nơi tốt để học.

예시: Yes, my school is well-known for its high academic standards. It has the highest scores in our district, which helps students have better opportunities for their future.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý tưởng không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng để diễn đạt ý muốn thay đổi.

예시: Yes, I think my school could improve by adding a library for research and updating the technology in classrooms to support learning better.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt không tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại để truyền đạt kế hoạch học tập tương lai một cách hiệu quả.

예시: After I finish high school, I plan to attend university to gain more knowledge and improve my job opportunities in the future.

× my school names Leonhard High School

✓ my school's name is Leonhard High School

The phrase 'my school names' incorrectly uses the plural form 'names' instead of the singular 'name' to refer to the school's name. The correct form is 'my school's name is' to indicate the singular name of the school.

× it'll future I think I will pursue the higher education like too

✓ in the future, I think I will pursue higher education too

The phrase 'it'll future' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'in the future' to indicate a time reference. Also, 'like too' is incorrect; 'too' is sufficient to express 'also'.

× Must cool cool. Leonhard High School is quite far from my home so I often take off and go to their bike

✓ Leonhard High School is quite far from my home, so I often take my bike to go there

The phrase 'take off and go to their bike' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'take my bike' to indicate using the bike as transportation. Also, 'go to their bike' is incorrect; it should be 'go there' or 'go by bike'.

× The by my motorbike it take me 20 minutes to getting there

✓ By my motorbike, it takes me 20 minutes to get there

The phrase 'to getting there' is incorrect; after 'to' (a preposition), the base form of the verb 'get' should be used, not the gerund 'getting'. Also, 'it take me' should be 'it takes me' to agree with the singular subject.

× the score input my school is their highest score in my district

✓ the scores in my school are the highest in my district

'score input' is unclear and likely meant to be 'scores in'. Also, 'is their highest score' should be plural 'are the highest scores' to agree with 'scores'.

× so to become earth still in there can take many benefit

✓ so studying there can bring many benefits

The phrase 'to become earth still in there' is unclear and incorrect. It likely means 'studying there'. Also, 'take many benefit' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'bring many benefits' or 'have many benefits'.

× it have many drawback that can add that must improve change as my school

✓ it has many drawbacks that need to be improved in my school

'it have' should be 'it has' to agree with singular subject. 'many drawback' should be 'many drawbacks' in plural form. 'must improve change as my school' is unclear; corrected to 'need to be improved in my school'.

× and do not have the library to force theorem to research or some technology in our class

✓ and does not have a library for students to do research or use technology in our class

'force theorem to research' is incorrect and unclear; likely meant 'for students to do research'. Also, 'do not have the library' should be 'does not have a library' to agree with singular subject and article usage.

× after I finish studying in my high school

✓ after I finish studying at my high school

The preposition 'in' is less appropriate here; 'at' is commonly used with 'school' to indicate attendance.

× I think I will push you higher education like to join the university to learn more

✓ I think I will pursue higher education by joining a university to learn more

'push you higher education like to join' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'pursue higher education by joining' to express intention. Also, 'a university' is more appropriate than 'the university' when speaking generally.