Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不够自然流畅。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更地道。

예시: I am currently a student at Shanghai Normal University, majoring in music performance.

제안: 回答断断续续，缺少连贯性，地名发音可能不准确。建议使用完整句子并用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: My university is located in the south of China, in a city called Haimen. It has a beautiful campus and is not far from the sea.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，注意主谓一致，并用连接词丰富内容。

예시: Yes, I think it is a good place to study because our school has a big library where I often study. It makes me feel energetic and motivated.

제안: 回答不完整且含糊，表达不清晰。建议明确表达想法，使用完整句子并具体说明希望的改变。

예시: Yes, I would like some changes because I am afraid of cold weather. I hope the study place can have better heating facilities.

제안: 回答中语法错误和词汇使用不当，表达不连贯。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和词汇准确性，清晰表达计划和感受。

예시: I plan to complete my postgraduate studies in the UK because it offers high-quality education. For my career, I will start my course in September, and I feel a little nervous about the new environment.

× Right now I am a student study in Shanghai Normal University and my major is music performance.

✓ Right now I am a student studying at Shanghai Normal University and my major is music performance.

这里动词'study'应使用现在分词形式'studying'，表示正在进行的动作。

× My university is located. In the South of China, in a city called High Man, it is a beautiful campus and. Is not far away from the sea.

✓ My university is located in the south of China, in a city called High Man. It is a beautiful campus and is not far away from the sea.

句子中断句不当，'is located'后应直接跟地点，且后面句子缺少主语，应补充完整。

× Yes, I think so be 'cause our school have a. Big library are you? Just study in there and it let me feel quite an energetic.

✓ Yes, I think so because our school has a big library. You can just study there and it makes me feel quite energetic.

主语'school'是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式'has'。另外，句子结构混乱，需调整使其通顺。

× Yes, of course, because. I am afraid of halt and code so. I hope the place I study. Where has some condition.

✓ Yes, of course, because I am afraid of cold and hot weather. So, I hope the place where I study has better conditions.

'halt and code'应为'cold and hot'，且句子结构不完整，需调整介词和句子顺序。

× Well, I plan to finish my postgraduate studies in the UK because it's offer high quality education.

✓ Well, I plan to finish my postgraduate studies in the UK because it offers high quality education.

'it's offer'中缺少第三人称单数动词形式，应为'offers'。

× For my carrier. I will start my cross in September so I am a little. Afraid in the new.

✓ For my career, I will start my course in September, so I am a little afraid of the new environment.

'carrier'应为'career'，'cross'应为'course'，且表达不完整，需补充完整句子。