Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应更清晰地表达身份和专业，避免语法错误和不连贯。可以简洁明了地说明自己是学生，专业是什么，以及简单表达对专业的看法。

예시: I am currently a university student majoring in economics. Although I initially chose this major, I have realized that it does not interest me as much as I expected.

제안: 回答应更自然流畅，避免语法错误。可以直接回答学习地点，并用连接词自然衔接原因和细节。

예시: I usually study in the library when I am at school because it is quiet and everyone is focused. However, when I am at home, I prefer studying in my room.

제안: 回答应完整且语法正确，避免断句和词汇错误。应具体说明为什么这个地方适合学习，并用连词连接句子。

예시: Yes, it is a good place to study because the environment is quiet and the facilities are complete. Also, I can study with many other students, which motivates me.

제안: 回答应表达清楚想要改变的具体方面，避免重复和语法错误。可以具体说明希望改善的环境或设施。

예시: Yes, I would like the study place to have a larger space and better facilities because currently it feels a bit small and limited.

제안: 回答应完整且语法正确，清晰表达未来学习计划。避免断句和拼写错误，具体说明计划学习的内容。

예시: In the future, I plan to continue studying my major and also learn additional skills such as Photoshop and other computer programs.

× I am a student now in university and I'm a graduate and I my major is on Sinai sand economy but actually I don't like my major anymore.

✓ I am a student now at university and I'm a graduate. My major is in Sinai and economics, but actually I don't like my major anymore.

这里的错误是单复数问题。'university'前应使用介词'at'表示在某个大学，'Sinai sand economy'应为'Sinai and economics'，其中'economics'是复数形式，表示经济学。需要注意专业名称的正确表达。

× I am a student now in university and I'm a graduate and I my major is on Sinai sand economy but actually I don't like my major anymore.

✓ I am a student now at university and I'm a graduate. My major is in Sinai and economics, but actually I don't like my major anymore.

介词使用错误，'in university'应改为'at university'，表示在大学学习。专业前应使用'in'表示专业领域。

× I am a student now in university and I'm a graduate and I my major is on Sinai sand economy but actually I don't like my major anymore.

✓ I am a student now at university and I'm a graduate. My major is in Sinai and economics, but actually I don't like my major anymore.

句中出现了多余的代词'I my major'，应删除'I'，保持句子通顺。

× It's depends on when I will.

✓ It depends on when I will.

'depends'后不需要介词'on'，正确表达为'It depends on when I will'。但此句语义不完整，建议补充完整句子。

× When I was in the school, I usually went to the library because the environment is so quiet and everybody is studying there.

✓ When I was in school, I usually went to the library because the environment was so quiet and everybody was studying there.

描述过去习惯时，动词时态应保持一致，'is'和'studying'应改为过去时态'was'和'was studying'。

× But when I was in home I usually study in my room.

✓ But when I was at home, I usually studied in my room.

'in home'应改为'at home'，表示在家。动词时态应与过去时间状语一致，'study'改为'studied'。

× Actually, it's really a good place for me to study because the environment is quiet and the facility there is.

✓ Actually, it's really a good place for me to study because the environment is quiet and the facilities there are complete.

'facility'应为复数形式'facilities'，且句子缺少谓语，需补充完整。

× On can't complete the and there are so many person complied with company in with me together.

✓ One can't complete it alone, and there are so many people who keep me company together.

'On'应为'One'，'person'应为复数'people'，句子结构混乱，需调整表达使其通顺。

× Yes, I would also the environment there and the facility is complete, complete, complete.

✓ Yes, I would also like the environment there and the facilities to be complete, complete, complete.

句中缺少动词'like'，'facility'应为复数'facilities'，表达更准确。

× I still think that the place for students to study is so, so. Little.

✓ I still think that the places for students to study are so few.

'place'应为复数'places'，'little'用于不可数名词，表示数量少，'few'用于可数名词，表示数量少，故用'few'。

× First I will continued.

✓ First I will continue.

'will'后应接动词原形，'continued'为过去式，错误。

× Learning about the major. I study now an action additionally I will learn some other. Author skills like PS on or.

✓ Learning about the major I study now. Additionally, I will learn some other author skills like Photoshop.

句子结构混乱，'PS on or'应为'Photoshop'，且句子缺少连贯性，需调整表达。