Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较简短且有语法错误，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且避免重复信息。

예시: I am currently a student at Rhyming University of China.

제안: 回答简洁但缺乏细节，建议补充一些关于学校的描述，使回答更丰富。

예시: I study at Trimming University of China, which is known for its excellent engineering programs.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议简化句子结构，使用连词使表达更连贯，并避免无意义的词语。

예시: Yes, it is a great place to study because it has excellent teaching facilities and an inspiring environment that motivates students to learn.

제안: 回答语法混乱且表达不明确，建议使用简单句表达自己的观点，并说明具体想要的改变。

예시: I would like the university to improve the study environment by adding more quiet areas and better lighting.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议简化句子并准确表达兴趣和计划。

예시: I plan to pursue a master's degree in Human Resource Management because I am interested in how people work in companies.

× I'm a student in Rhyming University of China now.

✓ I'm a student at Rhyming University of China now.

介词使用错误，应该用'at'表示在某个具体的学校。

× I study at Trimming University of China.

✓ I study at Trimming University of China.

此句无明显语法错误，介词使用正确。

× because it not only has a strong reputation for each technology and teaching facilities, but also the environment is very inspiring and very suitable for us to learning.

✓ because it not only has a strong reputation for every technology and teaching facility, but also the environment is very inspiring and very suitable for us to learn.

'each'用于单数名词，'technology'和'teaching facilities'应统一为单数或复数，且'learning'应改为动词原形'learn'。

× Two under two study.

✓ This sentence is unclear and should be removed or rewritten.

该句无意义，可能是口误或笔误，应删除或重新表达。

× It's hard to say if they changed it make to provide more suitable environment for us to study, I think I would like it.

✓ It's hard to say, but if they changed it to provide a more suitable environment for us to study, I think I would like it.

句子结构混乱，缺少连接词和正确的动词形式，需调整句子结构使其通顺。

× I plan to pursue a masters degree in Human resource management because I am interested in understanding than how people work in companies.

✓ I plan to pursue a master's degree in Human Resource Management because I am interested in understanding how people work in companies.

'masters degree'应为所有格形式'master's degree'，'than'多余，应删除。