Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在较多错误，建议简洁明了地表达当前状态，并说明未来计划。

예시: I am currently looking for a job. I hope to find a good position so that I can continue my studies or reconsider my future plans.

제안: 回答内容混乱，缺乏连贯性和具体信息，建议直接说明学习地点并简要描述该地特点。

예시: I studied in Changzhi City, Shanxi Province, China. It is a city that combines traditional buildings with modern urban life and has a rich history.

제안: 表达不够自然，语法错误较多，建议用更准确的词汇和句式表达学习环境的优点。

예시: Yes, it is a good place to study because it is quite remote and there are few distractions. This helps students focus better on their studies.

제안: 回答不够连贯，表达不清楚，建议明确指出问题并提出具体改进建议。

예시: I think it is inconvenient to travel from the school to the city center. I suggest adding more shuttle buses to make it easier for students to go out.

제안: 表达混乱且语法错误较多，建议清晰说明未来学习计划和原因。

예시: I plan to study a major related to math because I am not good at it. I want to improve my math skills and have better opportunities in the future.

× Neither are currently I'm hunting for jobs.

✓ Neither, currently I'm hunting for jobs.

句子结构混乱，'Neither'后应有逗号分隔，且语序应调整为'currently I'm hunting for jobs'，使句子通顺。

× So I want your Fender or good job should about your better then I can maybe continue to study or plan to alter my future plans.

✓ So I want a better job, then I can maybe continue to study or change my future plans.

句子结构混乱，词语使用错误，需简化并调整语序，使表达清晰。

× Uh, before I was started in.

✓ Uh, before I started.

'was started'错误使用被动语态，且不符合语境，应使用主动过去式'started'。

× Nothing Party of China, Located in Shanxi Province, Chan City is a city mixture with patient buildings and modern urban life.

✓ Datong City of China, located in Shanxi Province, is a city mixing ancient buildings and modern urban life.

原句中地名错误且结构混乱，应正确表达地名并调整句子结构。

× Or how it has a long history and where the adapter facilities?

✓ It has a long history and good facilities.

'Or how'和'where the adapter facilities'用法错误，应简化为正确表达。

× Yes, I think it's a good place to study because it's candor remote then not too much distraction.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good place to study because it's quite remote and there aren't too many distractions.

'candor'用词错误，应为'quite'，且比较结构错误，需调整。

× And we can concentrate on study and we don't have too much fun.

✓ We can concentrate on studying and we don't have too much fun.

'concentrate on study'应为'concentrate on studying'，且句子连接需更自然。

× There's one thing about is it's really inconvenient for us to go outside from our school to the center of the city.

✓ There is one thing: it's really inconvenient for us to go from our school to the city center.

'There's one thing about is'结构错误，应简化为'There is one thing'，并调整介词使用。

× So I suggest to enter more shuttle bus so we can go outside easily and the same time we can build a summer.

✓ So I suggest adding more shuttle buses so we can go out easily, and at the same time, we can build a summer school.

'suggest to enter'用法错误，应为'suggest adding'，且'shuttle bus'需复数，'build a summer'不完整，推测为'summer school'。

× My future plans was make going to.

✓ My future plan is to go to.

'plans was'主谓不一致，且时态错误，应为单数现在时。

× Some major related to math because I'm not good at math when I try to hold it.

✓ Some major related to math because I'm not good at math, but I want to improve it.

'try to hold it'用法错误，应表达为'want to improve it'。

× So I want to make up make up for this PT so I want to make some prospects on it.

✓ So I want to make up for this part and have some prospects in it.

句子重复且结构混乱，应简化表达。