Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct, keep it concise (max 5 sentences), and provide a clearer, more specific example. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., "because", "so", "for example"). Correct tense and phrasing mistakes and avoid vague phrasing like "photographed on vacation always remind me."

예시: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because photos help me preserve memories. When I look back at them, I can remember where I was and how I felt, so they bring back emotions. For example, on our last family vacation my son and I laughed at a sunset photo because it reminded us of that peaceful evening.

제안: Clarify unclear phrases and correct grammatical errors (e.g., "walking through few UH" is unclear). Keep answers coherent with linking words (e.g., "because", "for example", "so"). Add specific sensory details or a short anecdote to make the response more vivid and natural.

예시: I prefer rural areas because they feel cozier and more relaxing than the city. I enjoy the fresh air and wide green spaces, so a short walk along country lanes helps me unwind. For example, after a busy week I often stroll through a nearby park and listen to birds — it always calms me down.

제안: Improve grammatical accuracy (subject-verb agreement: "landscapes and architecture feel" or "seeing new landscapes and architecture is"). Use linking words to connect reasons and add a brief specific example of a place or style you find interesting. Keep it within five sentences and natural in tone.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because I haven't visited many and the scenery and culture are often very different from home. Seeing new landscapes and architecture is exciting and inspiring, so I return with fresh ideas and memories. For example, I loved the narrow streets and colorful buildings when I visited a European town last year.

× For example, our son said I photographed on vacation always remind me of that evening.

✓ For example, our son said the photographs I took on vacation always remind him of that evening.

The original sentence misuses 'photographed' (a verb) where a noun 'photographs' or the verb phrase 'I took' is needed, and has wrong word order. Also pronoun reference and tense agreement were incorrect: 'said I photographed on vacation always remind me' is ungrammatical. Use the past simple 'I took' for the action that produced the photos and 'photographs' as the noun; ensure subject 'they' or 'the photographs' agree with 'remind' and use correct pronoun 'him' for 'our son'. Suggestion: replace the verb form with a noun phrase or a correct past participle usage (e.g., 'the photographs taken on vacation') and fix pronoun and word order.

× I enjoy the fresh air and the natural scenery, and for example, walking through few UH would help me relax after a busy week.

✓ I enjoy the fresh air and the natural scenery, and for example, walking through a few [parks/fields] would help me relax after a busy week.

The phrase 'walking through few UH' has multiple errors: 'few' without an article implies 'not many' and is unlikely intended; it should be 'a few' to mean 'some'. 'UH' seems to be a filler or typo and should be replaced with a suitable noun such as 'parks' or 'fields'. Use 'a few' for countable plural nouns. Also verb 'would help me' is acceptable as a conditional/polite statement. Suggestion: choose a concrete plural noun and use 'a few' for clarity.

× Seeing new landscape and architecture feel exciting and inspiring.

✓ Seeing new landscapes and architecture feels exciting and inspiring.

Subject-verb agreement: the gerund clause 'Seeing new landscapes and architecture' is treated as a singular activity, so the verb should be 'feels' not 'feel'. Also 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to parallel 'architecture' and to match the idea of multiple places. Suggestion: use 'feels' for singular gerund subjects and pluralize 'landscape' to 'landscapes'.