Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and provide one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep within 3–4 sentences. Also use accurate verb forms and countable/uncountable nouns correctly.

예시: Yes, I do like taking pictures of views. I usually prefer photographing a single, small scene because it lets me focus on the details and composition. For example, I can capture the texture of leaves or the way light falls on a building, which makes the photo more striking.

제안: Start with a clear direct answer, then give specific reasons with linking words (for example, because, such as). Correct grammar (articles, word order) and be specific about the kinds of rural scenes you photograph. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer rural views because they offer diverse natural details. For example, I can photograph wide fields, winding rivers, and textured tree bark, which give me more creative subjects. Because there is less clutter than in cities, I can compose cleaner, more peaceful images.

제안: Answer directly and avoid vague phrases. State preference, give one specific reason and an example using correct grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' and avoid incomplete sentences.

예시: I prefer taking pictures in other countries because they often offer different landscapes and cultural scenes. For example, I enjoy photographing coastal villages in Portugal or terraced rice fields in Asia, which are very different from the scenery at home. These unique places inspire new compositions and perspectives.

× This is a really interesting questions.

✓ This is a really interesting question.

The noun 'questions' is plural but the demonstrative 'this' and adjective 'a' indicate a singular noun is required. Use the singular 'question' to match 'this' and 'a'. Suggestion: match singular/plural forms with determiners (this/a + singular, these/the + plural).

× I never thought about that before, but I think that I prefer taking picture of a single view small.

✓ I never thought about that before, but I think I prefer taking a picture of a single small view.

The phrase contains several issues: 'taking picture' needs the article 'a' and the noun should be singular 'picture'; adjective order is wrong ('single small view' rather than 'single view small'); 'prefer' does not require 'that' when followed by gerund phrase. Reorder adjectives (quantity/descriptor + size + noun) and include articles. Suggestion: use 'taking a picture of a single small view' or 'taking pictures of a single view that is small' depending on intended meaning.

× Well one reason is that I want to focusing on the stunning views for that is concentrated on one pictures.

✓ Well, one reason is that I want to focus on the stunning view because it is concentrated on one picture.

After 'want to' use the base verb 'focus' (not 'focusing'). 'Views' and 'pictures' number/consistency error: use singular 'view' and 'picture' when referring to a single subject. 'For that is' is incorrect; use 'because it is' or 'as it is'. Suggestion: use 'want to focus on the stunning view because it is concentrated in one picture.'

× I prefer views in rural areas more.

✓ I prefer rural views.

The phrase 'prefer X more' is redundant; 'prefer' already implies comparison. 'Views in rural areas' is wordy; 'rural views' is more natural. Also avoid adding 'more' after 'prefer'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer rural views' or 'I prefer views in rural areas' without 'more'.

× First is I could focus on and capture a lot stunning and striking detailed pictures of the nature and for example, I could take photos of.

✓ First, I could focus on and capture many stunning, striking, detailed pictures of nature; for example, I could take photos of flowers or landscapes.

Issues: 'First is I could' is awkward — use 'First, I could' or 'First, I can'. 'a lot stunning' is incorrect order and quantifier; use 'many' before plural noun. Adjective order: opinion (stunning, striking) before general descriptors (detailed). 'the nature' should be 'nature' without 'the'. Sentence ended abruptly 'take photos of' needs an object; add examples. Suggestion: restructure into a complete sentence and provide objects after 'take photos of'.

× There are actually a lot of countries that have more practicing view than ours.

✓ There are actually a lot of countries that have more impressive scenery than ours.

'Practicing view' is not a correct noun phrase; likely intended 'more picturesque views' or 'more impressive scenery'. 'Scenery' is an uncountable noun so use 'more' or 'more impressive' not 'more ... view'. Suggestion: choose appropriate nouns ('scenery', 'views', 'landscapes') and ensure correct form ('more picturesque views' or 'more impressive scenery').

× So of course I love to taking pictures in other countries.

✓ So of course I love taking pictures in other countries.

After 'love' use the gerund form 'taking' without 'to'. 'Love to taking' mixes 'love to + base verb' and 'love + gerund' incorrectly. Suggestion: use either 'I love to take pictures' or 'I love taking pictures.'

× One reason is that they just have more kind of sceneries that I've loved and for example, I could take pictures of.

✓ One reason is that they have more kinds of scenery that I like; for example, I could take pictures of mountains, lakes, or traditional villages.

Problems: 'more kind of sceneries' mixes singular/plural; correct is 'more kinds of scenery' or 'more types of scenery'. 'Scenery' is usually uncountable, so 'kinds of scenery' is preferred. 'I've loved' is odd for general preference; use 'I like'. Sentence ends without objects after 'take pictures of' — add examples. Suggestion: use 'more kinds of scenery that I like' or 'more varied scenery that I enjoy photographing'.