Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammatical accuracy, reduce hesitation, and organize into a clear two-part response. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms (e.g., 'I love taking pictures', 'When I’m in my hometown I rarely take photos') and replace fillers like 'umm' with brief pauses.

예시: Yes, I do, but it depends on where I am. For example, when I visit a new city or country I love taking photos of historic buildings and natural landscapes, because they show the local character; however, when I am at home I rarely take pictures since the scenery is familiar.

제안: Make a concise direct answer, correct grammar and use linking words for clarity. Say 'I prefer rural views' then give 1–2 specific reasons with correct verb forms and collocations (e.g., 'I rarely see natural landscapes living in a metropolis'). Avoid fillers and unclear phrases like 'prefer to watching.'

예시: I prefer rural views. Because I have always lived in a big city, I rarely get to see mountains or rivers, so I enjoy the peace and natural scenery of the countryside when I can.

제안: Give a direct statement then support with specific reasons and correct tense/use of vocabulary. Use linking words (for example, 'because' or 'for instance') and correct collocations (e.g., 'foreign countries', 'historical buildings', 'architectural style'). Remove repetition and hesitations.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy exploring different cultures and historical architecture; for instance, seeing unique cathedral designs or traditional houses helps me understand local history and design traditions.

× Umm it depends on what I'm located.

✓ Umm it depends on where I'm located.

Use of 'what' is incorrect when referring to place; 'where' is the appropriate question word/preposition for location. Replace 'what' with 'where' to indicate location.

× If I visit new country or new city I would love to taking pictures of the umm sto constructor buildings or natural landscape.

✓ If I visit a new country or city, I would love to take pictures of the old stone buildings or natural landscapes.

Several issues: missing articles ('a new country'), incorrect modal phrase and verb form ('would love to take' not 'would love to taking'), wrong adjective/noun ('sto constructor' unclear; likely 'old stone' and 'buildings'), and plural agreement for landscape ('landscapes'). Use base form after 'would love to' and add articles and plurals where needed.

× But if I living in a hometown I rarely taking a picture of.

✓ But if I live in my hometown, I rarely take pictures.

After 'if' use present simple for present habitual condition: 'if I live'. The verbs are incorrect forms: use base form 'take' not 'taking'. Include possessive 'my' with 'hometown' and plural 'pictures' or 'a picture' depending on meaning.

× I prefer view in rural area because I've always been living in metropolis so uh it's I barely see the natural landscape such as mountains or rivers so I will prefer to watching.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I've always lived in a metropolis, so I hardly ever see natural landscapes such as mountains or rivers, and I would prefer to watch them.

Multiple errors: articles and count nouns ('views' plural; 'rural areas' plural), article before 'metropolis' ('a metropolis'), verb tense simplification ('I've always lived' better than 'I've always been living'), adverb choice and placement ('hardly ever' instead of 'barely'), noun plurality ('landscapes'), and verb form after 'prefer to' should be base form 'watch' not 'watching'. Use 'would prefer to watch' to express preference.

× I definitely prefer another foreign country views because I wanted always wanted to explore other cultural or historical building because they have their own style constructors umm design of the building.

✓ I definitely prefer the views of foreign countries because I have always wanted to explore different cultural and historical buildings, as they have their own architectural styles and designs.

Pronoun and determiner issues: use 'the views of foreign countries' or 'views in other countries' rather than 'another foreign country views'. Tense and word order: 'have always wanted' for present perfect desire. Noun forms: plural 'buildings'. 'Style constructors' is incorrect—use 'architectural styles' or 'designs'. Clarify and correct word order.

× So I prefer different countries in.

✓ So I prefer visiting different countries.

Sentence is incomplete and has incorrect word order. 'Prefer different countries in' is ungrammatical. Use 'prefer visiting different countries' or 'prefer views in different countries' to complete the thought.