Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 语音与用词需更准确，句子结构应更简洁自然并避免冗余。改正发音错误（如“trapping”应为“traveling”或“travel”/“taking trips”），用一到两句主题句加一到两句具体细节支持，使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel. I find photos a great way to capture moments, and looking at them later helps me remember the places and feelings. For example, I often photograph sunsets or cityscapes to keep the memory vivid.

제안: 句子需更流畅并注意语法和词汇搭配。把观点放在首句，然后用一两条具体理由支持，使用连接词如“because”或“and”并改正形容词使用（例如“fashion”应为“fashionable”或“stylish”）。避免句子残缺。

예시: I prefer urban views because cities feel more modern and lively. For instance, the variety of lights, architecture and convenient transport make urban scenes more exciting to photograph.

제안: 回答需要更有逻辑和准确性，避免重复并补全不清楚的信息（如“my country 20”不明）。先给出明确答案，再用具体例子和细节说明为什么本国景色更吸引人，使用连接词如“because”或“for example”。注意语法（如动词时态和形容词比较）。

예시: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to the culture and scenery. For example, there is a famous area called Hoyado known for its vibrant lights and dramatic landscapes, which I find especially striking and memorable.

× Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views, especially when I'm trapping.

✓ Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views, especially when I'm travelling.

原句中使用了“trapping”，與語境不符，應為“travelling”（旅行）或“traveling”。這是一個動名詞/現在分詞的選用錯誤。建議：根據語境選擇正確的動詞，並使用動名詞形式（taking/travelling）。

× I think it's really a nice way to capture every moment and you can recall it by these pictures even after many years.

✓ I think it's really a nice way to capture every moment, and you can recall them with these pictures even after many years.

原句語法上有代詞與指代不明及介詞用法問題。“these pictures”應用作工具，用介詞“with”或“by”均可，但“recall it by these pictures”中“it”指代不明，應改為“them”（代指 moments）。並將連詞前加逗號使句子更清晰。建議：確保代詞指代明確，使用正確介詞搭配（recall something with/to see/use）。

× It's really hard to make a choice, but I prefer urban areas because it's more modern and fashion with many kind of lights and. Transport.

✓ It's really hard to make a choice, but I prefer urban areas because they're more modern and fashionable, with many kinds of lights and transport.

原句存在多處問題：1) 主語複數（urban areas）與後面單數代詞“it's”不一致，應用“they're”。2) “fashion”用作名詞，但句中需形容詞“fashionable”。3) “many kind of”語法錯誤，應為“many kinds of”或“many types of”。4) 句末“and. Transport.”標點錯誤，應連接成一部分。建議：注意主語與代詞一致，形容詞/名詞正確選擇，以及正確的量詞短語和標點。

× Of course, my own country, my country 20 is really famous.

✓ Of course, my own country is really famous.

原句有重複表達“my own country, my country 20”且“20”疑為誤輸。這是代詞/短語使用或冗餘問題。建議：刪除多餘部分，保持簡潔明確。

× This year's especially the famous landscape called Hoyado with many vibrant lights. So this kind of views really striking.

✓ This year there's an especially famous landscape called Hoyado with many vibrant lights, so this kind of view is really striking.

原句問題有：1) “This year's especially the famous landscape”結構不完整，缺少動詞“there is/there's”。2) “So this kind of views really striking.”中主語“this kind”搭配名詞應為單數“view”，且缺少系動詞，應為“is really striking”。還有“views”與“this kind”搭配數一致錯誤。建議：使用完整句子結構（加上there is或用This year...），確保主語與名詞單複數一致並加上系動詞。